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Reviews for Obsession

By : alicat999
  • From ANON - h on September 17, 2004
    interesting.
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  • From ANON - Sabrina on September 09, 2004
    I am really glad you updated. Keep up the good work.
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  • From ANON - ancientgirl on September 09, 2004
    Thank you soooooooo much for updating. But now you left us wanting even more. Please I am begging you on my hands and knees, update quickly.
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  • From ANON - mariteri on September 09, 2004
    The story is amazing.You are doing an excellent job of writing! I love it. One thing--you might think of having someone read it over, a beta reader if you will. I spotted some type-os here and there. Nothing that would effect the story itself, but you might want to keep an eye out so you can clean it up. Great work and updsoonsoon!
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  • From ANON - robin on August 29, 2004
    Please write more I miss this fic
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  • From ANON - Neled on August 11, 2004
    More! MORE!!! Now! Usually I am very picky about sentence structure and grammar, but this story was so interesting that I didn't even notice any flaws. That makes this a fantastic story in my boo; bravo.
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 07, 2004
    The best story I have ever read.
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  • From ANON - vania on August 07, 2004
    Fantastic!!!! Very veery ery very GOOD story. Please can I ask you to update soon? Anyway here I go UPDATE SOON, PLEASE........................ hugs vania
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  • From ANON - Lyndie578 on August 07, 2004
    It wasn't reall the ink, was it! I either love or hate the twins, and in this one I hate them. Hate them for creating any kind of doubt in Severus' mind. That was quite a plot twist, though it usually is harder for them to get together. Why can't it be easier for once? Probably because easy is not that interesting. Thanks for continuing this story. I'm looking forward to your next chapter--hopefully where Hermione continues to evaluate her feelings for Severus and wonders whether it was the ink or not. ?
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  • From ANON - ancientgirl on August 06, 2004
    You know I love Fred and George to death, but they tend to be a bit immature. Thanks for getting us this chapter, I've been waiting for it since yesterday.

    I can't wait for them to really gorkiorking together on some project.
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  • From ANON - superfreaky on August 06, 2004
    Your story is fabulous. I just stared reading it today. and please keep writing its so much fun to read. i hope the next chapter is posted soon. i can't wait and see what happens. you are a wonderful writer and i'm looking for more storys by you.
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  • From ANON - Coley on August 03, 2004
    The only thing that pops into my mind after reading the fourth chapter is "Ooooh, what happens when she goes back to work? When will the next chapter be written?" This is good stuff and I hope that you will decide to finish it soon .
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  • From ANON - 12345 on July 20, 2004
    That messy bit is supposed to say "You put commas in strange places." Don't know what happened there... :)
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  • From ANON - 12345 on July 20, 2004
    I really like this story and cant wait for more!! But...

    Your punctuation and sentence structure is a bit...off. You seperate paragraphs right in the middle of the sentence. And then you cut your sentences off at the wrong places. And you put cs ins in strange places too. You should fix that.

    But other than that, its great and I love it!!
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  • From ANON - Sherrafina on July 20, 2004
    I really LOVE this!!!! What a change from everything else! We want MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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