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By : alicat999
  • From ANON - beyond_evil on July 20, 2004
    wow....and I -mean- wow...I love your writing style. There is something really addictive about it. I can't wait for the next chapter ;)
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  • From ANON - Talene on July 20, 2004
    I have not forgotten you. I promise! I am not that accustomed to such quick updates and I will certainly check out your other stories! You are doing a wonderful job! I liked Ron ok from the movies and book but, i don't much care for him as a character. Never *have* much cared for narrow-minded people. Heh....That is how he seems to me. Though mind....I would make every effort to get to know everyone there if that opprotunity ever came to be. Hey! I can dream. Can't I? Isn't that what most of us are doing here in one form or another? hehe Ok, ok, ok.....I'll get off my soap-box now. *giggle* Great work! I'll look for updates daily now.
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  • From ANON - Sabrina on July 19, 2004
    I love the new chapter. Can't wait to see what happens next.
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  • From ANON - J on July 19, 2004
    Oh, I love this story, I can't wait until Hermione has to face him at work. Keep writing and update soon!!!
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  • From ANON - morgana on July 19, 2004
    yeah ronniekins got chewed a new one. te he. and snarky snape is back. poor s fin finally gets to kiss her and poof interupted. still excellent please keep going. well done.
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  • From ANON - Lyndie578 on July 19, 2004
    OK, I'll take a little tea with that lemon (laughing). Poor Hermione is so confused, but please note: she is not unhappy about having snogged Severus. Goody, goody! At least poor Neville didn't break them up. Oh, my.
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  • From ANON - Gia on July 19, 2004
    YAH!! lemon zest - my favorite!! (Only thing better is the whole lemon...but anticipation is a GREAT appetizer...) Keep up the great work!!
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  • From ANON - ancientgirl on July 19, 2004
    Leave it to Ron to muck things up. At least she has to realize not that Severus is interested in more than just her brain. Please don't keep us waiting to long for another chapter.
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  • From ANON - selened on July 19, 2004
    It's coming along very nicely. Please update soon.
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  • From ANON - Sabrina on July 18, 2004
    I really really want lemon. Please update soon.
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  • From ANON - Lyndie578 on July 18, 2004
    Very inventive! Snape actually leaves Hogwarts and spurs a wave of philanthropy! HA! And please, please, keep him snarky once you get him back there or she won't like him--too much change. Change of environment, OK; change of personality, NO! Snarkiness is so much more sexy! Hermione will think so too!
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  • From ANON - Titania on July 18, 2004
    So he's a little OC? I liked it, actually. Looking forward to the lemon zest in the next chappie, in fact I am brewing a pot of tea now!

    Live long and prosper.
    Titania
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  • From ANON - moe on July 18, 2004
    KEEP GOING WITH THE STORY.... its really cute!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Gia on July 18, 2004
    I like the level of ooc for Snape. I don't think that you went too far in having him acknowledge Neville's talents. Snape values intellience, and he can now acknowledge that although Neville is hopeless in other areas, he excells in Herbology. Can't wait for the update!
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 18, 2004
    This story has a lot of promise. I really like the premise. You need a beta to check for spelling (things like your and you're, to and too) which make the story look more amateurish than it actually is. But, it is off to a good start and I would really like to see the entire thing.
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