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  • From queenmorgan23 on August 20, 2007
    Wow. This story is amazingly beautiful. I really love it.
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  • From RandH4ever on April 10, 2007
    "Seems" as in "It seems like/as if..."

    "Seams" as in "Fix the seams of these dresses."

    You need to put "seems" for every place you use "seams". You also need to get a beta.
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  • From ANON - Kristina on November 09, 2006
    Hey, I really got into this story and am interested in reading past chapter 14. Is there any more of this finished elsewhere? Are you going to finish it at all? I'd love to hear from you. You're writing is very good and I got sucked into the story line so now I want to know more.

    Thanks,
    Kristina
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  • From ANON - vbollman(nsi) on November 02, 2005
    Hey there. I just finished reading what you had posted, and loved it all. I was just wondering if you are still going to update this fic at some point and time, i would love to see what's going to happen next/
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  • From ANON - cdkobasiuk on February 14, 2005
    I started reading this story a long time ago. I am glad you haven't given up and have updated. Very nice job.

    cdk
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  • From on February 13, 2005
    Very interesting chapter! I like how the relationship is so challenging between Severus and Harry. Both the dreams and Draco are making this so difficult! I did have a little trouble with Poppy's laissez-faire attitude to Harry beating up Severus. If you archive this story, you may want to add in a little worry that Harry is abusive, and a mention that this episode was brought about by a repressed memory. Otherwise, anyone in the medical field would try to stop the abuse, and separate abuser and abused to get an account.

    Great work. Thanks for the email letting me know about the update...I haven't been checking aff.net!
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  • From ANON - Katie on December 04, 2004
    Excellent. Purely Excellent. You are very good at writing. The opening of the chapter was almost poetic, you seem to have real talent! Please update soon!
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  • From ANON - izzaboo22neo on November 11, 2004
    wonderful story please write more and faster!
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  • From ANON - lol on November 02, 2004
    Hey, I`m waiting for a new chapter!!!!!!;)
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  • From ANON - cdkobasiuk on September 28, 2004
    What a very original and intrecit plot. The sex is wonderful too. Nice writing.

    cdk
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  • From ANON - phillie on September 26, 2004
    A truly excellent story, the smut and the cuteness are well balanced, and there's plot too!! Add good writing skills in the mix and the potion is perfect! I hope you are going on with this, I'll look forward to next chapter!
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  • From ANON - Hel Bee on August 30, 2004
    Wow! I am really enjoying this and wait patiently for updates!

    One small thing is that you keep spelling Lucius as Lucious I think it might just be the spell checker on your PC autocorrecting it! I am sure some peeps think Lucius ush ush but I'm more a Sev girl myself ;-)

    Look forward to the next update

    Hel Bee
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  • From on August 07, 2004
    What an amazing story! I love the depth of feeling here. I truly appreciate stories where the emotional state of the characters is more important than the physical, and you are certainly providing that! The first, and last, love scenes you wrote are some of the most erotic I've ever read. Amazing work! I wish I could find out when you post the next chapter: do you have a livejournal, or an update list? I don't want to miss it!
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  • From ANON - Sailor Sol (too lazy to sign in) on August 06, 2004
    This is shaping up nicely. Now, I would guess that old Moldywarts couldn't feed on Severus because of the bond. Interesting.

    Keep up the good work. If you get writer's block or need a beta, let me know!
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  • From on August 04, 2004
    oh my god how sad ! Please update soon
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