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Reviews for ORIGINAL: The Amour

By : Manhattan
  • From ANON - Malya on August 12, 2013
    Just wondering, I got to about the 7th chapter and it seems as if chapters are missing. For instance Harry gets hit with a bludger and Dracos all OMG! And then Harry's waking up in the infirmy and there no mess as to what happened. What did happen? Did they have sex? Did they jerk each other off? The who's prt seems to be missing. And then in chapter 8 the beginning he's saying something about running out of the dining hall; did he break up with Cho? I am very confused.
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  • From Forsakenmist on January 11, 2009
    Whats with chapter 4 and 7 are they meant to be that short???? if not then u need to re upload them or something if so then chapter 5 and 8 are very hard to follow because of the sudden unmentioned events
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  • From ANON - Anooka_Stormcrow on August 19, 2004
    OMG! Please tell me that is not the end! I do see that you have a part two that takes place 8 years or so, but what about the war?? Do we get to know what happens during the war? I do hope that you will post sometime along those lines in this story! And dude by the way, this story kicks ASS!
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  • From ANON - ziona2000 on August 17, 2004
    I just got goose bumps all over....*shiver!!* The big war! So Cool!! Hope that's what your sequel is about. (and not Mpreg - ugh) great story through and through!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! - ziona
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  • From ANON - Sailor Black 666 on August 11, 2004
    Wow that was an interesting chapter! A lot of things happened in this chapter! So now the war is started! And what happened to Draco? And is this the end of the story! Sequel . . . . ooooo thats got to be interesting! I cant wait to see what you are going to do!
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  • From ANON - Melagic on August 11, 2004
    OMG! How could you leave it like that?! Please make the next chapter soon, I hope it's a good and long one too.
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  • From ANON - gloriousgentry on August 08, 2004
    I hate you! I love you! You are a clever bastard. My heart almost stopped when you ended that scene with Voldemort aiming an avada at Draco, then you turned Blaise into a hero , then you started a good smut filled scene and had it interrupted by Ron and Hermione! What are you trying to do, kill me? Please update soon. I'm begging you!

    Gloriousgentry
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  • From ANON - Sailor Black 666 on August 07, 2004
    Wow alot happened in the last 2 chapters! I need to know what is going to happened! Please post the next chapter soon!
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  • From ANON - Jesonte on August 07, 2004
    Bonjour, bonjour...I just finished your entire fic today (all 16 chapters!) and enjoyed it immensely (why else would I waste my entire day, haha) and I do hope that you can update soon. You have alot of talent; keep writ~Au ~Au Revoir~
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  • From ANON - ziona2000 on August 04, 2004
    Poor Harry... having to go through all that! At least his friends are there for him and his main man Draco. How is this going to all end? Happly ever after seems too good doesn't it? Oh well great writing! Stop by my story some time. Site: Harrypotterfanfic.com. My story "6th year explorations" by ziona2000. I would also love to have some feed back if you have time. thanks kitty
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  • From ANON - Sailor Black 666 on August 04, 2004
    Who is it that found Harry?!? It was a great chapter! I need to know what is going to happen next! Please post the next chapter soon!
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  • From ANON - CC on July 30, 2004
    I am enjoying your story and looking forward to see what happens next. However, you probably neeed to read it at least one more time during your editing or your beta does. Sometimes you use the wrong word or overuse adectives such as 'anticipating fingers' - your fingers do not anticipate, you anticipate. A better way to say it would be 'he reached for it eagerly' or 'he reached for it nervously', whatever emotion you are most trying to portray. Don't let your adjectievs get away feom you. Anyway, good luck and I can't wait to see who is in the hallway.
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  • From ANON - sak on July 29, 2004
    As glad as I am that Seamus is expelled, how could that be without Harry's testimony? That just seems a bit too easy. The scene between Harry and Draco was wonderful and a great counterpoint to all the lies, deception and angst that has occurred. I look forward to see if Blaise gets what's coming to him.
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  • From ANON - ma-kun on July 28, 2004
    i am reading this on fanfiction.net as well and i love it! i hate posting on ff.net so i stopped but i love posting on here but ill probably keep reading it on ff.net but hey please keep going. remember from my laevieeview on ff i stayed up past midnight reading your story knowing i had to get up early!
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  • From ANON - Sailor Black 666 on July 24, 2004
    Go Malfoy help Harry out! But is Harry going to be mad? I guess I will have to wait and find out! Please post the next chapter soon!
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