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Reviews for That Girl

By : Asereje
  • From ANON - I'm adulted :D on December 12, 2006
    Don't stop, that was pretty good. Hehe!
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  • From ANON - Dr_Fawkes on July 05, 2006
    oh, how spine-tingling a story! you've got me hooked/intoxicated with the very 1st chapter. Is there some other place too where you've posted this story? If so, please tell us. And please, please update!
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  • From ANON - Mrs Sirius Black on January 24, 2006
    WHAT!!!! THAT'S IT????????????????????????/ NOOOOO!!!!! POST MORE!!!!! Don't stop there!!!!! That was great!!!!!! MORE!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - NymphNamedTonks on July 20, 2004
    Great start! It is such a relief to spot a well writen, developed story on this site; you mostly find smutty one-shots. I'm a sucker for L/J fics, and finding this one is like a dream come true. Thanks for staying in canon; it's really rare to find.

    Ppleeease continue!
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  • From ANON - Wilde-Oscar on July 19, 2004
    Seems good. I think the description is a little overly poetic - ie, I'd rather *see* the train carriage than know Lily has 'emerald' eyes. I like the build up though, definite potential there with a layering of description. I also like the description of James, but a little humour being introduced would be good. Some idea of the banter set up, and the wit that makes HP that much more interesting.
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