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Reviews for Hangover and other secondary effects

By : darkmoore
  • From ANON - miki on November 01, 2004
    oh that was so good. i hope they soon come to realise that they did marry for love and not just for the baby. sev loves him just as much as harry loves him. harry just needs to remember more of that night.. isn't there some type of potion that they could have given harry to make him remember that night again and the love sev showed him that night and told him as well... well i guess doing that would make the story end too quckly and not have the drama. Brilliant chapter as always!

    miki
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  • From ANON - Mara on October 30, 2004
    Evil, pure evil! I love cliff hangers and hate them at the same time. I like how you are dragging out the return of the victory party my.
    y.
    Will Harry find out that his Friends and Dumbledore coerced him into bonding? How will that pull Harry & Sev's relationship, which is already on tenterhooks?

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  • From ANON - amanda on October 30, 2004
    i glad the new chapter are up hope new chapter soon
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  • From ANON - Solo's Ghost on October 30, 2004
    PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE Update soon. I am really really loving this and I can't wai see see what happens next. This is such a great story!!!! When are they gonna realize they love eachother!!!! Can't wait to read more :)
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  • From ANON - Deep Emerald on October 12, 2004
    Oh, yes!!! Tension, tension! Oh, how I love a story that weaves plenty of tension and wrench throwing into the mix! I have a hard time finding other writers who enjoy taking a situation and complicating things within it as they go. I love the whole idea of creating a situation, holding out some hope that things will work out then snatching it away again - holding out more hope then throwing another wrench in the works, turning everything on its ear - smoothing things over again and then throwing another wrench in. Well done! *claps hands* Can't wait to read more!
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  • From ANON - Katie K on September 17, 2004
    OMG OMG OMG you are so damn cruel!!!!!!! CRUEL, I SAY, CRUEL!!!!!!!!! Ah well, please update soon. *holds out a place of your favourite cookies as a bribe* I'll love you forever if you update soon, I swear!
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  • From ANON - Deepemerald on September 16, 2004
    Nice. You have the horrible Rita Skeeter down perfectly. If that doesn't make Harry's blood boil out of his ears, I don't know what will! Poor Snape. Gets branded the bad guy even when he's trying to do the right thing! Looking forward to more!
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  • From ANON - Ezj on September 16, 2004
    Whohoo... the story is great... the more you write the better it gets^^
    Write much more^^
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  • From ANON - Mara727 on September 15, 2004
    This chapter was good. Did anyone else start singing 'Matchmaker, Matchmaker' from 'Fiddler on the Roof', when
    Dumbledore began hatching his new plan?

    The use of Rita Skeeter is pure genius for setting the plan in motion.

    I am anxious to see what goes on in the talk between Severus and Harry.


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  • From ANON - crissy on September 11, 2004
    aaaaaaaaaaarrrggghhhhhhhhhhh......!!! i'm begging you please update soon!!! huhuhu!!! its the greatest!!!!
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  • From ANON - fearon on September 09, 2004
    Have been reading this story since i first saw it up and i must say that you are doing a great job. It gets better with each chapter even though you did make me cry with chapter 10. Sniff, poor Snape but since you said that this will resolve, i can't wait to see what next you come up with. Keep up the good work.
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  • From ANON - Miki on September 09, 2004
    Stupid boy! if you would have listend to severus more you would have heard it in his voice the the man loved you.. stupid stupid boy... i just want to wring his neck... so is severus going to tell dumbledore that he can't be around harry cuz it hurts to much and leave... and then harry finds out that he did love him and did not want he child and has to go looking for the man he broke his heart. I would so leave after that... not even with 2 week notice or anything.. just up and pack and leave.. and he should because harry deserves to see how much he hurt sev... stupid boy... he might be the age of a man but he is mentaly a boy... and will stay that way until he gets it in his head that sev does not want his daughter to clam as heirheir but that he loves both of them very deeply. Brilliant just brilliant chapter really.

    Miki
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  • From ANON - Miki on September 09, 2004
    Stupid boy! if you would have listend to severus more you would have heard it in his voice the the man loved you.. stupid stupid boy... i just want to wring his neck... so is severus going to tell dumbledore that he can't be around harry cuz it hurts to much and leave... and then harry finds out that he did love him and did not want he child and has to go looking for the man he broke his heart. I would so leave after that... not even with 2 week notice or anything.. just up and pack and leave.. and he should because harry deserves to see how much he hurt sev... stupid boy... he might be the age of a man but he is mentaly a boy... and will stay that way until he gets it in his head that sev does not want his daughter to clam as his heir but that he loves both of them very deeply. Brilliant just brilliant chapter really.

    Miki
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  • From ANON - Judith on September 07, 2004
    Please, please, please a new chapter. I look every day twice for an update. I can't wait any longer.
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  • From ANON - Bunnicle on September 01, 2004
    I love your story! Please write more soon!
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