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Reviews for Hangover and other secondary effects

By : darkmoore
  • From ANON - DeepEmerald on August 31, 2004
    Ahhh, poor Sevvie. Harry's head's a bit off, isn't it? Hope he comes to his senses before it's too late to salvage a relationship.
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  • From ANON - Katie on August 31, 2004
    I still love this story. LOVE IT, I tells ya! LOVE IT. LOVE IT, LOVE IT, LOVE IT. :) I should probably sign in when I review, so you can distinguish me from other 'Katie's who leave a review, but anyway. Too lazy for that. :) I still love this story. UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!! Please?
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  • From ANON - Mara on August 30, 2004
    I am enjoying this spin on a Harry/Severus story.
    Some errors I've spotted are:

    "Do you understand what I say?" should be "Do you understand what I am saying?"

    reflected versus de-flected...reflect would be bouncing back, like a mirror does with your image; deflect would shift the power --Ebony deflected the bludger's impact to affect her father.

    This is a good story, Veilen Dank!


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  • From ANON - Agnes on August 30, 2004
    Wonderful!! Extremely GREAT writing!!!!
    I really love this story; Can hardly wait for the next chapter!!!
    Keep up the good work!
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  • From ANON - sacnad on August 30, 2004
    awesome storyline.. keep going at it mate!!!
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  • From ANON - Jet on August 29, 2004
    Oohh Poor Snape...Harry is off his rocker.

    It just gets be and and better.

    PLEASE Up date soon. Please!

    : )
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  • From ANON - dandelion on August 26, 2004
    Hey,


    endlich einmal eine mpreg Fanfic die aus der Masse hervorsticht.
    Ich finde es gut wie du Harry und Snape "leiden" l
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  • From ANON - chantalmalfoy on August 23, 2004
    Oh no! Severus is going mess things up!

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  • From ANON - Katie on August 15, 2004
    OH MY GOSH OH MY GOSH OH MY GOSH, I LOVE THIS I LOVE THIS I LOVE THIS SOOOOOOOOOO MUCH!!!!!!! I wasn't going to read it for a while, cuz when I read the summary, I didn't think I'd like it that much, but today I was like "oh, what the hell" so I clicked on it, and it was the best choice I've ever made!!!!!! I was hooked from the first sentence. Well, maybe not the FIRST sentence, but you get the idea. I love this story so much. It's fabulous, fantastic, amazing, great, brilliant, sensational, exceptional, remarkable, fantabulous, and I couldn't be bothered thinking of any more words. :) I love this story. LOVE IT! Please update soon! Do you have a general idea of how long the story is going to be? How many chapters? Anyway, LOVE IT. UPDATE ASAP PLEASE!

    lots of luv from a huge fan,

    KTK!
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  • From ANON - Jet on August 10, 2004
    Oi !

    This could turn out to be very very intresting now. Let the chaos insue!

    Very good chapter! Please up-date soon.
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  • From ANON - DeepEmerald on August 10, 2004
    Oops. I think I see a Harry Hissy Fit on the horizon. Poor Snapey. I don't think he sees this one coming! Great chapter! Nice characterizations and just enough doubt and angst in their minds to keep your audience on edge and uncomfortable while still wanting to see it resolved. Nice work!
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  • From ANON - Danielle on August 08, 2004
    Wahoo!!! I am loving ths story! Hehe! Keep Writing dude!
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 07, 2004
    Its good
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  • From ANON - Audrey on August 07, 2004
    Hi this is Tazthedevilman from ff ..... I just found out you had 2 more chapters posted here so I came and read them ahhhhhhh that was sooooo good. I can't wait to hear harry's reaction to this hole ordeal . great story I love it.
    thanks.
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  • From ANON - aliciamasters on August 07, 2004
    I'm really enjoying your story! I haven't been checking this site very often, since it has technical problems, so when I came back, I was pleased to see so many nhapthapters! I love that Severus finally told Harry the truth. I can't wait to see what happens next!
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