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Reviews for Hangover and other secondary effects

By : darkmoore
  • From ANON - lennnoxrose on August 07, 2004
    ohmigosh, are you just gonna leave us hanging????????

    0_0

    Update quickly, my love. ;)
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  • From ANON - xikum on August 07, 2004
    Lovely chapter, well explained, justifiable reasons---hope it continues along that sensible, yet caring line. But, you Stopped There?? Agghhh!
    Please continue soonest!
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  • From SailorAurora on August 07, 2004
    Hehehehe! that was just so awesome..... I love the idea of Harry being pregant, of course.

    But I can just picture the look on his face when Snape told him... *snickers*
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  • From ANON - Jet on August 06, 2004
    Damnit.......Sorry Why do you like to torture me? WHY?


    Any way good chapter. : )

    Please update soon.
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  • From ANON - Agnes on August 06, 2004
    Absolutely great!! I really love the story!!
    You might want to change 'the last time' (last chapter) in 'lately' or 'of late' or another similar expression though. By my knowledge, 'the last time', used as you do, is notrectrect english.
    Is your mothertongue by any chance dutch or german? For your use of 'the last time' in chapter eight seems to me awfully much like a literal translation of 'de laatste tijd' or 'die letzte Zeit'
    Anyhow, keep on writing! Your story is marvellous and I can hardly wait for the next chapter!!

    Kind regards,
    Agnes
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  • From ANON - chantalmalfoy on August 06, 2004
    YAY! Now they both know!!! Next chapter please... :)
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  • From ANON - CC on August 06, 2004
    I wasn't 'offended' by your use of the wrong words in your story and I'm not sure how you got that feeling from my review even after reading it again. Perhaps the word 'jarring' was too strong for you? But as an English writing instructor, I am used to teg myg my students how their stories affect the reader in general and suggesting ways to improve them. One mantra I use in my classes is edit, edit, and edit again. When I write, I edit several times and still have someone else do it for me - and usually read it over again after that. After I edit my student's stories, I have them go through and edit them again. I feel the editprocprocess is that important. Everyone makes misakes. And one thing, as a teacher, that I am a stickler about is using the corrext . I . I will admit that. I also told you that I enjoyed your story and was looking forward to more. Those are not the words of someone who is offended. Instead, I was trying to give helpful and constructive criticism. I am sorry if you were offended, it was not my intention. Since you seem to find my words harsh, and I don't want to make anyone feel bad, I won't review again but, I will instead wish you good luck. And keep writing.
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  • From ANON - Bunnicle on August 05, 2004
    Oh, you evil person! You can't just leave it at that! you hafta write more! please! write more!
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  • From ANON - Jay on August 05, 2004
    Ohh, I love it ^.^ Great story!
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  • From ANON - vash_the_dork on August 05, 2004
    Ich liebe diese Gechtechte. Es hat so viele Drehungen und Drehungen darin. Schreiben Sie bitte mehr.
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  • From ANON - Sevfan on August 04, 2004
    Great chapter. I can't wait for Harry's reaction. Keep up the good work.

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  • From ANON - M. North on August 04, 2004
    Loved it! More Please!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Carmella on August 04, 2004
    Hey that was priceless! Can I get more please? I enjoyed it very much and would like to see more of it.
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  • From ANON - Gala Snape on August 03, 2004
    You are cruel....Leaving the chapter in "that" part.
    I hope you can continue soon.

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  • From ANON - killerthecat on August 01, 2004
    I absolutely love this story! I can't wait to see what happens next-Snape tells Harry it was him? Oh I just can't wait! Please,please, please e-mail me when you update!
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