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Reviews for Unforseen Complications

By : Raihne
  • From ANON - mysticsong on June 28, 2005
    Wow.
    WOW.
    WOWOWOWOWWOW.


    This is really, really good. You ARE adding to it, right?
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  • From ANON - Priss368 on June 28, 2005
    The others are right, this last chapter was a tear-jerker! Wonder ful to read, but also sad. I find that the feelings/issues covered in this fic & particularly in this last chapter to be rather close to home for me as my hubby & I are experiencing infertility. Children are so precious & yet there are others out there that don't appreciate being able to have them!

    I love the dialogue between the characters. I find it to be realistic & well thought out. You make them human-not one dimensional.

    I can't wait to read more of this fic! It's wonderful!

    Priss
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  • From ANON - sbkar on June 28, 2005
    sniffle....
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  • From ANON - sak on June 28, 2005
    This was a hard chapter to read, to learn more what happened between Severus and Remus. Probably not easy to write as well with all the sadness. Nicely done and I look forward to reading more.
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  • From ANON - acr on May 24, 2005
    Really interesting start! Remus and Snape? Interesting! Please continue!
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  • From ANON - Priss368 on May 24, 2005
    I really like this fic! I find the characters to be so sweet & the story to be very touching! I bet Draco likes Harry! I wonder if you'll go into more detail about why the baby was stillborn? Maybe Snape could figure that out & improve the male pregnancy potion for Draco & Harry? Can't wait to see what happens next! Priss
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  • From ANON - sak on May 24, 2005
    I just found this story and it has so much potential. Snape dealing with the loss of a lover and a child while forced into a becoming a Death Eater spy--with Remus returning. Harry probing for the truth and wondering what that means and Draco having sympathy and wanting to try the potion Severus developed. Excellent potential for passion and conflict. I look forward to more.
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  • From ANON - Rydia_p on April 17, 2005
    Hey, I love this, more? You haven't updated your site either, what's up?
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  • From ANON - Chys on December 20, 2004
    I like this story, have read others on your site and love the Anja series, especially how she relates to the gundam wing characters. I got into YYH because of that fic! Is there a way you can update that one soon?

    I like your gundam wing ones as well, and the -chans are an adorable series! I enjoyed the perfect prize. I really liked beyond the bounds of time as well.

    Are you going to continue your Love Build WK arc?

    Hope your mother gets better, my own was in the hospital for a serious surgery so I can understand how much you would want her to get better and how that can affect your internet time, I couldn't think enough to get anything written while she was ill. Good luck in the future!

    Chys
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  • From ANON - Myrddin Ambrosius on July 22, 2004
    Hey, you've got a great start to your story. I'd love to see where you go with it. I hope you decide to continue it soon.
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  • From ANON - bwalsh on July 20, 2004
    A good beginning, I am very interested in finding out what happens next. Please update soon! Thanks,
    bw
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