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Reviews for Voices

By : KBowman
  • From ANON - stef on October 27, 2006
    well... that was... *cough* different... i don't think i've ever read a story with purely dialogue in it before... t'was hard to read at first but i suppose you get used to it... the um... story line however,... well, like i said, different ending...

    Stef
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  • From ANON - Naria on May 15, 2005
    Oh yeah, and just so you know, I think it's very safe to ignore that "Sharon" person's review, as it seems said reviewee is an unimaginative and very sour reader. Half the fun of fanficdom is finding the unexpected in the expected! ^_^ I think you did a wonderful job capturing the passion of the human heart and what it can do to warp a person's decisions, especally in matters of love! You took a typically juvenile plot and helped it mature into a deeply emotional and well laid (no pun intended ^_^) worldly story! It is a work of art! And not to mention, if you called it a death-fic in the description, then that would ruin the ending!! It was so unexpected! I LOVE that fact that it wasn't sunshine and rainbows, but rather dark love and desperation! It's a refreshing change from the cutsey norm and you deserve congratulations. So, I thank you for sharing this wonderful piece of your imagination with us!
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  • From ANON - Naria on May 15, 2005
    O.O

    O.O

    O.O

    Harry went crazy...


    COOL! ^_^


    That was awesome, and very bittersweet and maybe a little creepy...But still AWESOME!! I liked the format of the story and the plot and everything, but i feel bad for Draco...I'll bet he's kinda mad that Harry killed them...I know I would be, but there's no point in haunting another ghost! Poor boys and stupid Draco's stupid pride!! >_< STUPID! But other than that, pretty awesome and endearing...STUPID HARRY!! Men...leave it to them to make something as lovely as yaoi, and them go and be dumbasses with their pride crap!
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  • From ANON - thrnbrooke on May 12, 2005
    OMG!!!!!!! Harry flipped out and killed them both! I'm floored!
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  • From ANON - The Author on May 12, 2005
    Hi, just thought I'd respond to the people who are displeased with the ending. Firstly, I'm sorry if its not something you wanted to read but I can't exactly warn you. If I put the ending on the summary it'd be just a bit pointless to read it at all. In fairness, I did put dramatic conclusion :) yes, I know, not the same.

    Secondly, I know it started out light and got dark. That seems to happen with fics I do with Draco in them. I can't imagine much in the way of many happy endings for Harry and Draco, its mostly just my style of writing for them. The Harry Potter books have elements of that - a few lighthearted story lines with a sad or upsetting ending, such as Sirius's demise in the fifth one. Hey, at least you know to avoid my HP/DM fics in future :p

    I'm not apologising for having written it that way - some people enjoyed it, some didn't, in the end I liked it that way and I can't please everyone. But I'm sorry people are a bit upset with how it ended because I do try to go for a good ending. Thanks for the criticism - I'll bear it in mind for the next HP/DM one I do.
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  • From ANON - sharon on May 12, 2005
    Well this story sure sucked. It would have been amusing to have known a death fic when I was reading one. I think to take my time to lead me into a story that I would have ordinarily not chosen sure is a lousy way to make friends. Thanks for the piss off. I just love to have my choices made for me.
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  • From ANON - Brittany on May 11, 2005
    what????? omg... no, no , no i refuse to believe it!!!!! i will just make up a happy ending in my head and tell myself that's the way it ended, yes thats what i'll do!!! great story tho!!!
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  • From ANON - Closet Skeleton on May 11, 2005
    At first, I'll admit I was a little confused by the whole lack of anything but dialogue, but I soon fell into the groove, and I really liked it.

    And the ending - that was *good*. Very clever. I really liked how it moved from hilarious to almost depressing in the end, but so cleverly done! I liked alot!
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  • From ANON - ura on May 11, 2005
    I was really enjoying the story until the very ending. I think the ending spoiled the whole set up. The story is a kind of cute and funny, and the ending is too morbid an incongruous with the main text.


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  • From ANON - Michaela Shinoda on August 26, 2004
    A dark fic and well written. I don't think I would be able to write a whole story by just using quotes. Extremely detailed for lack of details. If that makes any sense. Prolly not. Anyway, it kept me on edge all the way through. Thanks. It was something that really got my attention.
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  • From ANON - Sailor Black 666 on August 19, 2004
    OMG! What a way to end the story! Wow I didnt think it would end that way! But it was still a good ending!
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  • From ANON - lawr on August 16, 2004
    god!!! I can't believe they're both dead.... I mean...Whoa... *sits down, head getting dizzy* love it though but...Whoa...
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  • From ANON - Sailor Black 666 on August 11, 2004
    You posted more! ^.^ I had 3 chapters to read . . . think I need to check on this story more! Well I will be doing that more now! What interesting chapters you have written! And what a change of events sence the first chapter! I hope you are going to write more! Please . . . oh PLEASE write more of this story! And soon!
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  • From ANON - kwalagirl on July 30, 2004
    Very good. I like how you've used dialouge only. Just a heads up though, it's kind of hard to get whats going through draco's head because he acts one way and the rem remorsefull.
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  • From ANON - Eadon on July 29, 2004
    Hey! I was too lazy to sign in. I loved the chr thr though. Oh! The confusion!! Hum.... I actually thought it was intereting to see that everyone say the video. Im very curioo seo see how Draco will react *grins* Cant wait for the next!
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