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By : draconisdemented
  • From ANON - Anon on July 14, 2005
    Parts I have read form basis for an excellent and original story.

    However it seems that every second part has been accidentally deleted or was never uploaded as there are large discontinuities between parts.
    The plot always jumps forward between parts leaving significant holes in the story.
    (For example: In the first part G is spying B&D but in the next part they have obviously been together for some time.)
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  • From ANON - Ann on June 29, 2005
    I just wanted to let you know that there are big chunks missing from this story. I started reading it here but got so confused about what was happening but I liked the idea of the story enough to check it out at FF.net. After reading it there, and filling in the gaps, I really like your story. You might want to try to fix the missing chunks so that other readers won't get confused.
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  • From ANON - Psi on June 27, 2005
    Hey i know this story! Dracademented are you going to post more of its sequel on FF.net ? Please do I still love your writing.
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  • From ANON - Amanda on June 17, 2005
    Hey Henna LEAVE OFF! People make mistakes. It'll be alright, and she's not butchering it. You're butchering her! SO LAY OFF!
    Girlie, you just keep on doing what you do. And i think the french is a wonderful touch to the story. It does make them sound more elegant, but it's also positively romantic. So just do what you want to do.

    -Amanda
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  • From ANON - Amanda on June 17, 2005
    OMG...i read your story first of fanfiction.net and absolutely fell in love with it. I think i told you that there but i can't remember. Well, i love your story. I read it all the time. I even have it saved to my Favorites list. You're a brilliant writer and you convey everything so brilliantly it's all so exquisit. I love your writing and i love you as an author. You're brilliant babe. Keep you spark and keep doing what you do, you do it oh so well.

    Your devoted fan-Amanda
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  • From ANON - sexypink20022 on June 13, 2005
    hey. i just love your story. the thing is though, that i've read it before, and i think that its missing some chapters. like right after the polyjuice potion wears off and ginny is ginny again, in the old version that i've read, ginny then explains to blaise and draco why she is there...but in this version, it skips that and goes onto when draco and blaise relaised that they love each other. and when draco, blaise and ginny go to talk to harry, hermoine, and ron, there is susposed to be a part where, blaise and draco leave the room and start making out and are seen by a first year and scare her, but thats not there either. there are a lot of chapters missing and so the story has holes in it. if you could fix this and e-mail me when its fixed, that would be great. i really love this fic. but it needs to be fixed. thanks.
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  • From ANON - Death in a Pink boa on June 04, 2005
    Chapet 21, Yuletide Cheer, is missing
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  • From ANON - Davina on March 23, 2005
    I really like this story! Chapter Twenty One is missing but besides taht teh story is amazing! Please post soon because i will be waiting for what will come next!

    -Davina-
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  • From ANON - ab137 on February 08, 2005
    I love your story! Your french is really funny, but even speaking french I have to read the english translation to understand, the program you use isn't very good. ch
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  • From ANON - Henna on December 21, 2004
    don't bother with the french if you can't speak it. i understand that you want blaise and draco to sound elite, and that perhaps that would help. but you are butchering it far beyond belief. surely there is someone you can ask with a basic knowledge of the language that could explain that a conjugated verb is necessary to form a sentence.

    also, by this point, i'm honestly not sure what the hell the plot is. do you have an ending worked out yet? because this all seems totally pointless.
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  • From ANON - Henna on December 20, 2004
    you need someone to check your french for you. that question about "my mother's middle name" should have been something like "qu'est-ce que le nom milieu de ma mere?"
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  • From ANON - pamma on December 16, 2004
    what happen? why are they friends? god, i'm so fucking confuse
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  • From ANON - pamma on December 16, 2004
    this story is sooo freaking intrusting! i think i love you for writeing this
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  • From ANON - Melagic on December 11, 2004
    I'm CRYING!!!!!!!!!, I hope you know that.
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  • From on December 01, 2004
    i hope you haven't forgotten your story, it's wonderfully written. please up date soon
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