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By : draconisdemented
  • From ANON - Kat on May 22, 2014
    Hi, I love this story so much! I read it years ago, and just recently found it again. I had a question though - it seems like it's different... have you changed anything?
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  • From JaceDamian23 on October 16, 2007







    "Who are you?" Blaise repeated. "And what the bloody hell are you doing in my body? And snogging Draco, at that?"

    "He snogged me!" Ginny said without thinking. Draco snorted

    LMFAO


    and aww ginny always liked blaize and draco?cute


    "What brings you so foolishly into the heart of Slytherin, little Weasley?" Blaise asked,
    love the sentence

    "What an absolutely thrilling welcome. Please tell me you don't greet everyone like that."



    "Never, darling." Draco replied, sliding off of Blaise and intertwining their fingers. A wave of his hand, and they were clean and unruffled once more.

    haha

    i dont like how its a month later....i wanted to know what happend that night

    "You know," Virginia said, and their eyes flashed back to her. "For two pampered, lazy bastards you can move awfully quickly when you want to."
    lol


    "What the hell was that?" Harry questioned, speaking up for the first time as warmth began creeping back into the room.



    "Gee, and here I was thanking the gods that you'd forgotten how to speak." Draco snapped sarcastically
    lol

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  • From Ingi22 on August 16, 2007
    i remember readin this when you only had a few chapters up but stuff happened and i couldn't use a computer for a while and i forgot about this site. aaaaanyways, i came across this site and wanted to finish readin it but the chapters are only half there!! the first ginny/draco/blaise scene is gone :(
    you HAVE to fix it puh-leeeeeaaaaaaaaaaase!!!!
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  • From ANON - Pyratica on December 22, 2006
    You are evil!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Nooooooo!!!!!!!!! Bad cliffhanger!!!!!!!! Authors*throws hands up in exasperation* can't live with them can't live without them... You better get the end posted soon or there is going to be trouble!*glares mumbles about needing to learn how to threaten properly* I need to go talk to Isaac(my lichen he's evil not really but we let him live with his delusions and he makes it seem like he is) he should be able to help... hmm... anyway loved the story but it skipped a lot and there were a couple typos i just couldn't get past cuz im a grammar geek when reading anything...post soon!!!!!!!PLEASE!
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  • From ANON - danielle on October 24, 2006
    hey i was absolutly enthralled with your story and toatally loved it your a great writer and did a wonderful job with it. thank you for writing something long and entrancing i enjoyed it keep up the good work :) (cause i just love ginny, draco, and blaise it made the story even better lol) laters
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  • From ANON - WitchyWiccan on October 23, 2006
    You have to update soon! I need to see how this ends. Great story!!!
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  • From ANON - Cat on September 18, 2006
    I love this story first off, but it seems like parts of the chapters are missing. It reads like places just aren't there, like what ever Draco and Blaise's mums did to bring them back, yeah not there though the info on the different deities are. Also, parts of words and sentences are missing. Could it have been from the site reformating or what ever they did? Just thought you'd like to know. Even with that though I do enjoy this story. It's my fav pairings all rolled into one!
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  • From VermillionRhodes on January 28, 2006
    Well, I'm going to ff.net to find it because this place has done a serious butcher job here. Huge chunks missing! I hope you are able to fix it because it's a great story and it would be a shame for others to miss out because they can't find it over there...
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  • From ANON - erin on December 12, 2005
    The story seems really good, but there is a problem with the chapters, sections are missing. I was wondering if you could fix them, please, so I can fully enjoy your story.
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  • From ANON - Anna on November 07, 2005
    The story seems really good, but there is a problem with the chapters, sections are missing. I was wondering if you could fix them, please, so I can fully enjoy your story.
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  • From ANON - Melissa on October 16, 2005
    Omg! I am in love with this story and I'm only on Chapter 10! I swear I get nothing done now and I probably won't untill I finish this story! I spend so much of my time reading it lol. Anywho, I luv you for the Blaise/Ginny/Draco thing because, frankly, I don't think there are enough of those stories on here lol. Also, I like the incorporation of the gods in there, it's soooo interesting and exciting to read. But, I thought that I should bring to your attention a few glitches with the story, don't worry! Not the story itself, but there seems to be a glitch in the system or something because in chapters 6,7,8 and 9(and this is only so far) there seems to be jumps in the story, like chunks of it are missing, like when they deal with that hell demon or w/e. it cuts off at the end of the chapter and I have no idea how Ginny, Blaise and Draco got those marks that link them to their god or how they were 'chosen' because its not even in there! I was so upset lol because it's so amazing, the whole thing, the plot, the pairing(or trio, whatever), the whole damn story! and peices are missing! lol anywho, I would luv you forever if you could check that out and try to fix it or whatever because I really want to know what happened!! lol. So other then the glitch in the site, you are my hero and I now worship you lol
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  • From ANON - Cac on July 20, 2005
    Yeah, like Anon above said, I clicked chapter two and wondered if I accidently went to a different story or something.
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  • From ANON - Cac on July 20, 2005
    Right... typical that I leave a reveiw like my last one and then end up not liking the story after all. sigh
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  • From ANON - Cac on July 20, 2005
    Oh YES! I LOVE finding stories that I think I'll like, that are long, that are already well under way or completed. And I really like this one! (Dark look) Just hope you don't diapoint me...

    Ok-ay, yummmy yum yum, can't wait to get back to it so why the hell am I talking to you? Ha.
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  • From ANON - on July 17, 2005

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