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Reviews for Bad Faith

By : angharad1143
  • From ANON - kamilla on October 23, 2006
    Wow!

    That was incredable! Really bloody fantastic! I honestly don't think I have ever read something quite as good as this, it had me on the edge of my seat the whole way through. I just adore how everything was explained, everything made sense. There were no red herrings so to speak, which is a rare thing in Harry potter fiction beacsue it is just so hard to do.

    It was just a truely beautiful peace of writing!

    I LOVE IT!

    x
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  • From ANON - Darian on January 02, 2006
    Brillant ...Just brillant! That's all I can say I sat and read this whole thing in one sitting.....This goes on my recommend list! Thanks for the great story!
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  • From ANON - LilithBoadicea on November 28, 2005
    I had to pop in and review this. I found it over on the dhr_ficsearch on livejournal and recalled that you once reviewed one of my own stories and had a nifty knowledge of every good Snapefic ever written. It was odds on that this would be good and it is. It's very good. Extremely good.

    As far as concrit goes, I can say only that you really jumped us feet first into the deep end of Draco crushing on Hermione. There are a couple of bits that are about as clear as mud, eg; what memories she saw. I have the impression that both will be cleared up eventually, however, which makes it not so much concrit as a reader's mental notes.

    Your sense of timing and pace is brilliant. That pause before shooting a line at us, like this chapter's begining where Hermione says, "UGH." It adds a great deal of zest. The one-liners and inner monologues are snappy and highly amusing. It all flows just perfectly. Love the tension, love Moody and Kingsley. I'll probably add a few more reviews as I keep reading.
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  • From ANON - gaby on November 27, 2005
    AWESOME I LOVED IT I LAUGHED I CRIED ...IT WAS KICK ASS
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  • From ANON - Kenda on October 21, 2005
    Wow!!! That was great. I couldn't stop reading and i had tears in my eyes so often. The time travel element didn't bother me but that might be because i play Role play games a lot and we have a GM ( GAME MASTER person who is in control of the plot and non player characters) that just loves time travel and alternate realities, so i'm so used to it not it makes sense :).

    Anyway thankyou for the story it was really well written and i hope you keep writting.
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  • From ANON - angel on August 22, 2005
    please please make a sequel i just lov e this story i cryed when draco die and i cryed some more then she saved him by giving him the mark i just cant waitin till you make a sequel or another story you are a goor author keep up the good work and in till next time later

    angel
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  • From ANON - PhoebeADA on May 26, 2005
    First of all, I really loved the ending! I think it fited well with the story. i just loved the story by the way.
    As much as I would wish for a sequel I doubt that you are writing one so......

    Great job one of the best H/D I
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  • From ANON - Morrighan on April 04, 2005
    It's the author, again. Apparently, my poor story got all torn up in the last site crash. It's been fixed, and thank you, thank you, to my many reviewers. Your comments are invaluable whenever I start to wonder if I'm taking the story the right way or not.
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  • From ANON - crystalizedsoul on April 02, 2005
    ooooooooooo...love, love, LOVED IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    Just read the whole thing straight through.
    It's bloody brilliant.
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  • From ANON - gypsy on March 30, 2005
    Oh My God.
    I'm still reeling. Wonderful, amazing, gut-wrenchingly awful... It was brilliant.
    All of the utter *cliches* you often find in fics - bonding, time travel, pregnancy, love conquering all, many deaths while the Trio live on... weren't contrived or yak-worthy in this fic. You justified all of it. Never once did I think suddenly (as I often find myself doing) "oh, yeah RIGHT". Happy to say I was not choking on the fluff or dodging badly-written plot twists coming out of left field.
    10/10
    Well done. Keep 'em coming.
    Gypsy
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  • From doorock42 on March 29, 2005
    This is absolutely brilliant. The only thing that really didn't fit in terms of POV shifts was the shift to Harry during the Final Battle... it didn't seem to fit. Not that it wasn't a good scene, because it was.

    Great moments: the revenge of Fleur, Malfoy informing Hermione of her failure, riding into the jaws of death...

    And a side note: as I listened to the battle in Diagon Alley, "Long Way Down" by the Goo Goo Dolls was selected by my MP3 player. When Hermione went back to make her changes, "Change" by Tears for Fears was selected. Serendipitous.

    I'd like to say I want a sequel, but to be honest, some things are best left as single volumes. This works better as a completed work.

    So write something else, dammit! Just not a sequel.
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  • From ANON - Carla on March 29, 2005
    This is a wonderful story! You did well with the time travel. The chapters you added are great additions that flow very well with the rest of the story - I can't imagine the story without them. The fight scenes were great - I've never been able to write battle well, so I praise you for your superior skills. When Bill dies - Fleur's French is just heart-wrenching. In all honesty, at the end, I wanted Hermione to be pregnant, regardless of how trite or how cliche it might be. It's a great way to end the story. I would love to see a sequel.
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  • From ANON - Nymphe on March 28, 2005
    Great story...I have to mentally catch my breath because it moves so fast.
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  • From ANON - Ania on March 25, 2005
    Chapter 10 is cut off too.
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  • From ANON - Ania on March 25, 2005
    !!! Where's the rest of chapter 5?!!!
    It breaks off in the middle of a sentence in the middle of the attack and, given where the next chapter picks up, there's obviously a big chunk missing.

    Anyway, I'm loving the story so far, especially your characterization of Draco. Hermione has been a tad less impressive so far, but maybe that's just my aversion
    to the "He kissed me!" melodrama that appears in so many fics. But that's a minor complain, and all signs indicate that I'll be compelled to finish the story in one sitting.
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