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Reviews for Perfect Things

By : whitehawk
  • From ANON - lily anderson on July 29, 2007
    "My fingers are tingling, my throat is dry, my eyes are burning."

    -FFVII
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  • From ANON - PoisonedSugar on November 29, 2005
    This was really good, and since you mentioned Blaise wanting revenge, is there going to be a sequal? PleasePleasePlease? *puppydog eyes*
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  • From ANON - scully on October 03, 2005
    what a completely bizarre tale! I am glad i dont live in your head! haha you are definitely a slytherin! i could hardly keep up with all the plots and revenge and who was allying with who for which plan! deviousness abounds! yeah, i felt a little sorry for blaise there at the end but ah who cares at least harry gave draco another chance. lets hope draco doesnt fuck this one up! hahahhaha
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  • From on September 21, 2005
    oh and btw, did you have to let Ron come of so greasy? lol I love ron so much, he's a cutie...now he even made me feel disgusted when Draco kissed him...ugh!
    Oh and are Ron and Harry ever going to be friends again?
    :)
    xx Angel
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  • From on September 21, 2005
    wow! I know I'm late with reviewing but the last few weeks (or more months lol) i didn't had time to read much, so i tried in between, but yesterday i just had it and printed out all the chapters i hadn't read so far, and read it out right away! :) I loved it, i really liked this story, and there have been times i flew up all offended or angry haha. Its good you're going to edit some though, because I can see some grammar mistakes and word mistakes..i knew exactly what you meant, but sometimes you picked the wrong word ;) (don't get me wrong, I'm dutch myself and make mistakes all the time) but i thought if you're going to edit this i might point it out! okay a question: Are you going to let Blaise take revenge? because i really DON"T want that! lol i don't think Draco can stand much more, the poor guy :D I am hoping you will write more stories, because i find this one very interesting, i loved it when draco became blaise with the potion and how he acted so jealous, marvelous! I wouldn't mind a continued story to this one, but blaise is done, i feel so bad for h/d already! Anyway, I'm ordering you to continue writting and hope to see something interesting yet again next time :) *claps* good job! xx Angel
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  • From ANON - evila on September 09, 2005
    WOW GREAT STORY !!
    I LOVED IT !
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  • From ANON - thrnbrooke on September 09, 2005
    Oh I don't want this to end! I want a chapter 13! I've gotta know what the future holds!
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  • From ANON - roxierose13 on September 09, 2005
    That was a bitter sweet ending. I normally like Blaise, but you made me hate him! Good job though, developing the characters that much. I think the end didn't have much closure though, are you gonna add a sequel? Good job, again!
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  • From ANON - eLiz on September 05, 2005
    That was evil of u :K. HOw could u let us hanging like that? I NEED 2 read more. Peace Out.
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  • From ANON - somekindofberry on August 22, 2005
    I so hate Blaise in this story - but thank you for ending it the way you will! If you'd ended this chapter one paragraph prior I would still be hating you - but how can I hate you when you're about to make it all better? Looking forward to the final installment.
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  • From ANON - Flash on August 19, 2005
    plz plz plz plz telll me thiz won't b ur last draco/harry story i think pointless forever and perfect things havce been the two best stories i've ever read on this web site plzz don't stop writing these fanfictionssssss!!!! and update soon
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  • From ANON - Nony on August 19, 2005
    Wow. Am still loving this story!
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  • From ANON - thrnbrooke on August 19, 2005
    Evil cliffhangers! I need chapter 12! What is going on?
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  • From ANON - somekindofberry on August 12, 2005
    I appreciate that you want to get some tension back into the Harry/Draco-ness - but did you have to make Harry so bloody stupid at the same time? To even consider listening to a Slytherin after what he's gone through (not to mention his conveniently forgetting Draco's declaration of love) just smacks of plot-device and idiocy. Draco's final thing - to sacrifice himself to Blaise's sexual whims just to keep him away from Harry - erm ... odd. To say the least. His bottoming for Harry was significant - even though you haven't even brought that to Harry's attention yet - and offering to bottom for Blaise ... just ... cheapens that. I mean - he's a Malfoy, he's been a perfectly wonderful manipulative Slytherin for the entire story so far ... and yet as soon as he falls in love, he gives up on it? As soon as he's found 'the one', he's willing to give up Harry, give up his 'gift' to Harry to Blaise for the foreseeable future, and not once think about how to kill/permanently dispose of Blaise? It's just weird. Is he on drugs or just wildly OOC? Is Harry on drugs for listening to Blaise? I suppose you've given yourself an 'out' by having Blaise *not* fuck him in the corridor outside Gryffindor House ... but really? Just because Pansy made him promise? Why would we believe that such a bastard would keep a promise? I have to say ... I really wanted to stop reading this after chapter six. Why, you ask? Because I saw so much potential for *this* type of scenario ... Harry and Draco would have enough problems being honest with each other and trying to have a relationship, after the way they got together. ('I've Never' was an expected situation really - your readers were waiting for the hammer to fall ever since Draco performed the polyjuiced deed.) I guess I'm just wishing I'd stopped now, before it got too strange. I hope you redeem it with your next chapter though ... *lives in hope*
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  • From ANON - Calena on July 29, 2005
    Damn, Blaise is such a bitch! Come on Harry/Draco... get it together!
    Loving your work, btw, update soon please.
    xxx :)
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