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Reviews for Alteration (Corruption 3)

By : Beren
  • From ANON - akuma_river on December 23, 2004
    Wonderful story. Keep up the great work. Coolsa.
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  • From Slytherintwincest1 on December 16, 2004
    Whoa!!! This is a fantastic fic. Love the whole dark creature thing, I did read the first two so don't go and worry, just didn't feel like reviewing at the moment on those. But this is really good I mean seriously I never even thought about a dark! harry like that, there is usually only one, so this was like really really original and that's not normal.. But tis really great and I hope that you write more. Though there is one thing I don't like and that's the different stories its like i dont harder to follow that way, but still love it~~

    AJ
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  • From ANON - Sky on September 02, 2004
    I love this story. First I thought you would make Harry a kind of "dark superman", with all these abilities, but I was pleasantly surprised this is not the case. Harry is still Harry, a bit darker now and with morobleoblems, but also with something to compensate him for this. I really hope you'll write another part, after all, Draco's trial is still to take place, but mostly because I greatly enjoy this story. Oh, by the way, the "power of two" is also a good one. Even if I prefer Corruption.
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  • From ANON - Brit on August 28, 2004
    I love this series. Normally I don't like sub! Draco but this is just perfect. I do hope you are continuing this epic, and I look forward to the next installment.
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  • From ANON - Somali on August 15, 2004
    I'm note sure if I have reviewed this butcasecase I didn't, I'm going to do it now. I love this series. I think that it's amazing to see Harry control the dark side of his nature now. And Draco, the way that he surrenders to Harry is simply amzing to read. However, I'm abit worried abt what Wormtail had done to Draco. I hope it's nothing really bad. Heheh I do like submissive Draco so I really like how this fic goes. Hmm.......I really wonder if this is the end of this series. I hope not. I have really grown to love this se. Hm. Hmm.....don't know how you feel abt mpreg though. Would be interesting if one of the dark creatures in Harry has the capacity to make Draco pregnant. Just wanted to let you know that I love all your stories. You are an fantabulous writer! *grins*
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  • From DemonBlaze on August 04, 2004
    That was wonderful! i do hope you put up more! this was just beautifully done as is your other work!
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  • From ANON - Svetlana Lvova on August 04, 2004
    Your epic is one of the most beautiful stories I've ever read in the 5 years I've been in this fandom. It's tender, loving, detailed, with wonderful charaizatization, unique and a total delight. For me, it was love at first sight of Corruption. The appearance of Alteration at veelainc made me give a squeal that was heard all over the office, sit on pins and needles while printing it, and rush out to the cafeteria for five cups of coffee to read, first Alterations ( The WHAT HAPPENS NEXT?! WHAT HAPPENS NEXT?! WHAT HAPPENS NEXT?! WHAT HAPPENS NEXT?! syndrome is untreatable,er aer all!), and then to re-read Corruption and Distortion. My sincere compliments to an author, who passed my harshest fic test: created a terrific epic that gets only better and becomes even more of a pleasure with every re-read and that makes a reader want to come back to it over and over again.

    My sincere gratitude for the great pleasure I got from reading all of your stories, starting with Gold Tinted Spectacles.
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  • From ANON - Somali on August 04, 2004
    I love your stories!!!!! Hmm........I think it's really great that his friends are all standing by him. Simply love the slowly developing relationship between the two. Slow yet utterly sweet at times. Like the part when Harry wakes up and gives Draco a kiss. Hm.....I do wonder what happened between Wormtail & Draco. Nothing too terribly bad I hope. I don't lto sto see Draco suffering too much. More soon of this storyline I hope.
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