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Reviews for It's always easier to run

By : h0lden
  • From ElementalDemonessSorceress on July 02, 2007
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From on June 28, 2007
    This is a really good story. You got me hooked! Can't wait for the update. Do you have a mailing list to let us know when you update? If so put me on it. Thanks!
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  • From ANON - lydia on September 11, 2006
    I really like this story and have noticed that it's not been updated for a while. I was wondering if you had planned to finish and if you already have where I might be able to find it.

    I hope to hear from you soon.

    Lydia
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  • From ANON - Megan Consoer on June 26, 2006
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From ANON - Edania on December 14, 2005
    hope you finish this story, i like it.
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  • From ANON - linda on September 25, 2005
    what is keeping you? There has not been a update for a very long time and I am really wanting to read the rest of the story.
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  • From ANON - linda on June 04, 2005
    Brilliant. Please hurry up and finish the story I can't wait.
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  • From ANON - Cristie on March 28, 2005
    I truly hope that you finish this story. It is unlike any other that I have read on this site and am very drawn to it.
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  • From ANON - radical whitman on February 12, 2005
    a pretty good fic with the occasional spelling/grammar/usage problem.
    one question. in Chapter 8, Judith calls Hermione "Hermione" and I thought that everyone knew her as "Sandra". is this a deliberate plot device or a typing mistake made in the frenzy of a plot bunny attack? just post your answer in the next chapter.
    thanks,
    radical whitman
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  • From SphinxFantasy on January 26, 2005
    Fantastic! Brava! I simply cannot wait for the next installment. I believe you deserve an award for you fantastic method of characterization, never straying from the snarky dark potions master we all know and love. This is quite an interesting plot... new, different and extremely refreshing! There is a certain intrigue to your story and I am very excited to finally have them confront their feelings toward one another. I'm hoping you will add another chapter soon, but until then I shall wait as patiently as I possibly can.
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  • From ANON - curly on January 16, 2005
    So glad to see a new story by you. It seems such a long time since you posted. Already this seems to be a very interesting story. Please get a beta. There were many mistakes in ch 1 alone. I don't mean to be very picky,but I thought it might help for some of them to be pointed out. 1st you go back and forth with the pronoun for Crookshanks referring to it as her in a few places and then changing to he( I think cannon is he but not sure),ie "ginger cat mewed softly as her master.... "Hermione wondered alongringly.." What is that last word? I couldn't even figure out what word you may have meant. In one sentence your word order made it sound like Hermion was missing her "absent"fingertips. Perhaps you meant to use absentmindedly. Please review proper use of plurals and possessive and the plural possessive. These are all mixed up. Ron and Harry were like her brothers ( plural =s w/o apostrophe) Her parents would have been proud ( parents should be w/o apostrophe in this case as it is only plural) Parent's murder( this should be parents' murder as it is plural -both parents and possessive as the murder belonged to them. I know it can get confusing. A few odd sentences The house was a cherished part of Hermione's home. Was there more to her home?The garage perhaps? Maybe it would read better The house was a cherished part of H's childhood or it held cherished memories. Another odd( to my ear) sentence was,"... as he continued his duration to the dungeons..." replace duration( length of time) with another word ie trek, walk, trip, way etc.
    Please don't take any of this as a flame. I just know that many readers will skip stories if they have too many errors and I hate the thought of readers skipping over yours when I know from past stories how original of a writer you are (yes,preposition at the end of a sentence-send the grammar police).
    Keep on updating.
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  • From ANON - Fury on January 11, 2005
    Umm, are you using a beta? There're no spelling mistakes, but there are some duplications and some imagery that don't quite work out in my mind. E.g. "...in a way, blah-blah in a way..." and when Crookshanks growl and she feels his fur under her "absent fingers" it would probably be more clear if she absently felt his fur under her fingers...

    I love all your stories and can't hold it against you that you have several going at the same time and are starting a new one, write more soon! (Any or all of them that is ;) )
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  • From ANON - Innogen on January 11, 2005
    Hey, it's been awhile since I've read this. Glad to find another chapter!!

    Innogen

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  • From ANON - Sabrina on January 10, 2005
    Great work. I can't wait to see what happens next.
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  • From ANON - alatariel aldarion on August 16, 2004
    hurry up! write more to this!
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