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Reviews for The Raven

By : BreeMcGregor
  • From ANON - Susan on March 09, 2005
    Congrats on the "A" and a YAY! you updated. Good chapter and I loved the subtle way Severus came back from the "dead". hee hee. I hope that he visits Hermione and lets her in on his secret. Not wanting to rush things with them...I love when characters seem to take a natural course. Thanks again for the update.
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  • From ANON - daygonna on March 09, 2005
    yay! another chapter and it was great. its been sooo long, wonderful that u got an A on the exam, maybe now u can update more. ^_^ well ill be waiting for the next chapter
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  • From ANON - magicalwonder on February 22, 2005
    This really is a good story. I like the direction that it seems to be going. I personally can't wait till Snape see's Draco, or the other way around.

    B
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  • From ANON - Lady Tigresa on February 09, 2005
    I love this story so much! I hope snape will show hermione his feelings.Update soon!
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  • From ANON - Amanda on February 08, 2005
    Why haven't you updated this?! I can't believe you've stopped, It was so good!
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  • From ANON - Amanda on February 06, 2005
    Please update this! It is so good! You shouldn't let it just die off!
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  • From ANON - edie on January 16, 2005
    please for the love of god update!!!!! it will kill me if i dont know what happens!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - AJH on January 14, 2005
    PLEASE, PLEASE UPDATE THIS SOON! I AM GOING TO DIE IF YOU DON'T!
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  • From ANON - cdkobasiuk on January 14, 2005
    Great job. I liked your Snape.

    cdk
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  • From ANON - Moi on January 14, 2005
    It's a lovely, charming, sweet story, and I like it very much. I am looking forward to seeing what happens. The plot idea is an interesting twist on the Hr/S 'ship. I have only one real criticism, which I hope is constructive. Your story reads like a children's book, and the masturbation scene seems as if it was inserted to meet the ratings expectations. I understand the purpose of it, of course: to give Snape a heads-up (in more ways than one), but stylistically it doesn't fit together. I enjoy the simplistic style of your prose so much, I hate to suggest adopting a more sophisticated voice just to fit in with the erotic expectations of the website, although that would make the story as a whole hang together better.

    Please please please do not stop writing this story. It has a great deal of promise, and so does your writing.
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  • From ANON - alexica evenstar on January 12, 2005
    TTTTTTHHHHHHHEEEEEEE BOMB AWSOME KEEP IT UP KEEP IT UP, WE NEED OUR GIRL TO HAVE ASS KICKIN MOVES AND WANDLESS MAGIC.
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  • From ANON - DArk topaz on January 12, 2005
    update
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  • From ANON - ancientgirl on January 11, 2005
    hey, thanks so much for getting another chapter up. I've missed this story. I almost fell out of my seat when Severu/Raven fell off his perch!
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  • From ANON - daygonna on January 11, 2005
    its so great to finally have u update! i had thought ud given up! i hope that since things r working better that ull update again and soon! ill be waiting. ur still doinf a great job writing by the way
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  • From ANON - robin on January 11, 2005
    oh i am so glad you are still working on this fic I love the plot and i a looking forward to reading more.
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