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By : BreeMcGregor
  • From ANON - Roget on September 21, 2004
    Arrgh!! I NEED you to finish the whole thing, I really do! And could we get a bit more of what's going on in Severus' head, pretty please?! It must be quite interesting to have a man's thoughts feelfeelings as he watches Hermione day and night. You could even do a chapter reassessing what's been going on from his POV - and his reaction to Ron's attack on Hermione. Plus, he's got to be feeling lots o' angsty thoughts about whether or not he's been exposed to Voldemort. And what about his Dark Mark? Does this mean that Moldy Voldy can't tell that he's still alive?

    I am eagerly awaiting more - in fact, you are marked under "My Favorites" so I can keep checking back!
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  • From ANON - Roget on September 21, 2004
    Arrgh!! I NEED you to finish the whole thing, I really do! And could we get a bit more of what's going on in Severus' head, pretty please?! It mus qui quite interesting to have a man's thoughts and feelings as he watches Hermione day and night. You could even do a chapter reassessing what's been going on from his POV - and his reaction to Ron's attack on Hermione. Plus, he's got to be feeling lots o' angsty thoughts about whether or not he's been exposed to Voldemort. And what about his Dark Mark? Does this mean that Moldy Voldy can't tell that he's still alive?

    I am eagerly awaiting more - in fact, you are marked un"My "My Favorites" so I can keep checking back!
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  • From ANON - Meep on September 20, 2004
    this is really good, cou pou please email me when you update?
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  • From ANON - Squibette on September 18, 2004
    This fic is refreshingly original and fun. Please post more chapters soon
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  • From ANON - Tataru on September 14, 2004
    Well done! That weasel Ron, How dare he! Can't wait to see how Snape will react when he comes back to his human form again.

    Waiting for your next update! Hope it's soon! :)
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  • From ANON - Persia on September 12, 2004
    Cute story! So brave of birdy Sev to help out Hermione in her terrible situation! That bastard Ron! Too bad Sev couldn't turn back into a human and knock him for a loop!
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  • From scwolf10k on September 09, 2004
    Snape? A Raven? WONDERFULL!!!! I hope that you'll update soon!!! I want to see what will Ron do next. And mostly, I'm interesting in finding out about how would Snape confront Ron after he gets fully healed. *evil grin* I already feel sorry for Ron!!
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  • From ANON - Renata on September 08, 2004
    OOOOh! Please write more! It's just getting really good. Such a cliffy ending!
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  • From ANON - Amiastine on September 07, 2004
    Hi!!
    I really, really love your story. Just the idea of Snape as a bird, especially a raven, is totally appealing. I like how you give Hermione two facades and how Snape gets to see both of them, whereas Harry and Ron (especially Ron...bastard) don't seem to understand it or even see it at all. Sev's thoughts are hilarious too...
    As for the style, well it's not bad at all...very good indeed, I would say. It's nice and flowing easyeasy to read...you'd make a fine writer, you know?
    Oh well, gotta go now...I do hope you write more soon!!!!
    Love
    Amiastine
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  • From ANON - angelusdream on September 07, 2004
    Great story hope you continue
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  • From ANON - jeannette on September 07, 2004
    brilliant.......please continue.i want to know more.
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  • From ANON - Quartz on September 06, 2004
    Excellant!! I'm a bit confused as to wether "Snape - Raven" felt that Harry and Ron were blocking Hermione's growth or if it was Dumbdore. Please do another chapter soon!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - amsev on September 06, 2004
    Evil!Ron, Poor abused Snape! Reeeaaallly evil cliffie. Update soonest!
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  • From ANON - Sabrina on September 06, 2004
    I think this is a good chapter. Please update soon.
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  • From ANON - droxy on September 05, 2004
    poor snape- he's going to be stuck in bird mode for a while. manipulative! Albus- what fun.

    what shock HGs going to be in for when she realizes who the bird is
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