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Reviews for The Raven

By : BreeMcGregor
  • From ANON - azulkan2 on April 20, 2005
    Glad to see the update. Will be watching for more. Hope RL doesn't tromp to hard.
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  • From ANON - cdkobasiuk on April 19, 2005
    aw come on a over protective Harry is just too sweet.

    cdk
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  • From ANON - JJ on April 19, 2005
    WOW! WOW! WOW! WOW! WOW!!!! If you study as well as you write, you'll ace your exams! That was a wonderful story! Well plotted, excellent characterizations and details. Your writing is smooth as well, but I will admit some of the typo's make it rough. I wonder if the movement from one server to another is bad. Your characters are pretty true to the cannon. I love how we get to see a more forceful side to Dumbledore, most just talk about his twinkle. The bond between Severes and Hermoinie will be very important in the future, I bet. So much is going right in your story that I've become one of your loyal fans and look forward to more story!
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  • From ANON - JTBJAB on April 19, 2005
    A shame it is so short, but school etc is more important *despite what my soul tells me, my brain is right*

    As long as we have another update sometime soon, short or long, im sure everyone will be happy!
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  • From ANON - ChevyBaby on April 19, 2005
    Don't apologise for the length, I'm just happy to have an update for this fic. I really enjoy this story and hope it's not going to be too long before the next chapter arrives :o)
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  • From ANON - ancientgirl on April 18, 2005
    Hey Bree, thanks for the update. Great chapter, but I hope Harry doesn't just get off with a slap on the hand. Just once I'd like to see him get reprimanded in a story. I'll keep my fingers crossed and hope you don't let me down. He did punch a teacher after all.
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  • From ANON - Avanell on April 18, 2005
    I love this story, but hate the Ron stuff now. Don't like him as a slut at all. Please get Sev and Hermione more interactions...with NO mentions of Harry or Ron...Please!!!
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  • From ANON - e.j on April 15, 2005
    i can't believe that snape would go that far to punish ron...but then again he deserved it...hehehe...keep up the good work n update it soon
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  • From ANON - Smokey Quartz on April 02, 2005
    Glad to see that you are staying with the story. I've really enjoyed the progression of Hermione and Shape's relationship. I"m looking forward to the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - Anon on April 02, 2005
    I love it!!!
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  • From ANON - Golden on March 31, 2005
    Oh, Awesome! Please, write more!
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  • From ANON - Geovanna on March 31, 2005
    Brilliant, I hope you update soon!!!
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  • From ANON - Avanell on March 31, 2005
    I forgot to post! Anyway, was so happy to see you posted last night/this morning. LOVE this story. IN this chappy loved how Snape visited her and then made his revenge on Ron (although I hope Ron prat is a virgin in this story - he doesn't deserve any!) for Hermione, and not for how Ron treated his as the Raven. Hmm...what shall happen next? And Hermione is clever enough not to spill even to "just a bird". Great job!
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  • From ANON - droxy on March 30, 2005
    Hmm a jealous Snape is a venful Snape- love it. But does Snape know he is jealous...love this fic
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  • From ANON - Anon on March 30, 2005
    hehehehehe- Sneaky Snape!
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