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Reviews for The Pain of Freedom: Part 1 of the Empowered

By : SeraphtheFallen
  • From ANON - Jill on August 22, 2004
    I'm hooked, I'll be checking every day for up dates. Keep them coming. JILL
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  • From ANON - Nova on August 22, 2004
    Feels like a good start! I really want to know what happens... Hope theres more soon:)
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  • From ANON - Linis on August 22, 2004
    Poor darling... please write more soon i would love to read the rest.

    LINIS
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  • From on August 22, 2004
    Woot! This is really good and you don't have a beta? You must look it over ubber hard before you post! *^^* I wasn't really looking for them but I hardly found any mistakes in either chapter! I also love what you've done with Harry's character! He's not all whiny and scared shitless. Instead he's strong, and all leaderly like but you made sure to make him just this side of an iceburge so he shows some amount of feeling, if he didn't he wouldn't really be Harry now would he?! ^.~* I really like it and can't wait for more, so update soon!!! And Email me when you do, update that is, if you could please? It would really help me out! *^^*
    Hugs&Serpents'Kisses ~Dassy
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  • From ANON - yazz on August 22, 2004
    ohhhh.. looking very promising indeed! i love terrifyingly-powerfulHarry. i don't think you need a beta, it was pretty right but should you ever want i would happily try. i've never done it before but... it would mean i would get to read the next chapter sooner wouldn't it ..;-) xyazz
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  • From ANON - Kristy on August 22, 2004
    nice, I like it so far. I'm usually not a fan of "soulmate" stories but it can be done well and yours is off to a great start.
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