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Reviews for The Pain of Freedom: Part 1 of the Empowered

By : SeraphtheFallen
  • From morningstorm70 on April 20, 2018

    When are you hoing to continue i have the page bookmarked and check from time to time 

    Please update


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  • From morningstorm70 on October 18, 2017

    Please update


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  • From sheep196 on February 27, 2010
    Please update soon!!!
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  • From leftyzrul on January 18, 2007
    This is a good story and I can't believe it hasn't been finished. You have teased and captured me please finish it and with a happy ending.
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  • From on November 21, 2004
    I like this story a lot! Please update as soon as you possibly can!

    Suzuki-chan
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 09, 2004
    awsome
    i really hope you update soon

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  • From ANON - renata lloyd on October 21, 2004
    i like ur story very very much. please update soon. it's really interesting.
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  • From ANON - silverpanther on October 20, 2004
    Hi please don t make Severus mean again let someone show him how to love because he has hidding his feeling for so long I hope Harry and Severus do get with each other great story bye
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  • From ANON - Jewel on October 20, 2004
    grrrr.. how dare you end it there! update update update!!!! please? *puppy dog eyes*
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  • From ANON - Kat Potter on September 07, 2004
    I really like this story. I usually don't review (i know, i know, shame on me!) but i decidedthisthis time. I like stories with super Harry, as long as they aren't TOO unbelievable, and also stories about bonds or soulmates and stuff like that. So your story is right up my alley isn't it? Well, anyways, you are a good writer, not like some of the crap i've read. I hope to get to read the next chapter soon.
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  • From ANON - Linis on September 05, 2004
    Honestly Severus its your own damn fault... This is a brill chapter but i have to say you take way to long in updating its not fair

    Still feel more sorry for Harry than I do Severus tho.

    More Please

    LINIS
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  • From ANON - Aylin on August 29, 2004
    Yay! New chapter!
    So. That was the joy. Now comes the complain: That chapter is way too short to satisfy my curiosity, and my urge to read on ;) I buy the soulmate-part, though. It might be clich
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  • From ANON - izzaboo22 on August 25, 2004
    I like it, you started it off nicely.
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  • From ANON - Aylin on August 24, 2004
    I really like this thus far! Grammar and spelling are more than acceptable (I didn't consciously look out, but I usually notice major mistakes while I read), you're doing a fine job even without a beta. I'd volunteer if you need one, though by the standard you show here, that wouldn't be that much work, huh? :)

    I'm really curious to see how this scene came to be. At first I was rather put out with Harry being so powerful, but well, there IS that prophecy. As long as it's plausible (and it sure seems so here), why not? This beginning is really intriguing me.

    I hope you update soon!
    Until then... :)
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  • From ANON - Katie on August 23, 2004
    I love this. Seriously, I love this so so much. If you don't update soon, I will hunt you down, and... and... tickle you until you update. :)
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