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Reviews for Dances With Witches

By : Pearle
  • From ANON - AmberD on January 17, 2006
    Excellent story. Very well written and with a true plot. Can't wait for more.
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  • From ANON - cecille on January 15, 2006
    i really loved the latter part of this chapter, especially when the face-off with rancine heated up. i liked how you kept the scene focused and the dialogue quick and to the point, and especially the way you showed off hermione and severus' relationship at the end when she was a little lost and he was trying to take care of her. update soon :)
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  • From ANON - Scandalia on January 15, 2006
    love it love it love it.
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  • From azulkan2 on January 15, 2006
    Woohoo, love this fic. To bad Severus was able to rein her in. LOL I would have loved to see her toast that, as you say, oily little bastard. Eagerly awaiting the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - Obsidian_Hair on January 15, 2006
    Love your story, I can't really give you any constructive critizism, it's perfect as it is... My guess would be, that the pendant somehow linked Hermione and Severus including their powers. Some kind of deep bonding... Rancine is horrible. And I really hope that that new fellow Michael what's-his-name won't try to seperate Hermione and Severus, hate those people!!
    The last update was really quick, are the other ones likely to be as quick as well?!?! Please.... =)
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  • From ANON - GaiaAthena on January 15, 2006
    Two chapters in as many days! This is fantastic! I can't wait for the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - firewall on January 15, 2006
    Another chapter!!!!! I was so excited to see it and what an exciting chapter it was. Severus is so generous in sharing the spotlight with Hermione...she did deserve to be their as she did devise the alterations to the Potion. Racine is a snake and as satisfying as it would have been to blast him off the face of the earth, I'm glad they didn't.

    I still wish that Hermione could apprentice with Severus. He would give her the latitude she needs to reach her full potential. I understand the scrutiny they would experience because of their relationship but so far none of the other masters have impressed me.

    I was worried when I saw you had a new story posted that you would forget about this one...Thanks for continuing. It's one of my all time favourites.
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  • From ANON - barb burke on January 15, 2006
    I've been following your great story and am enjoying it immensely.Severus is such a wonderful character and you instill him with so much sexiness that you literally make me drool. Thanks for the brillant work and looking forward to more. Love barb
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  • From ANON - Jessica on January 14, 2006
    Beautiful fic. I haven't even gotten close to finishing what is posted yet but already I love it. A lot of stories I've read online are poorly written and thought out and they're more of a mockery of a real story. Yours is one of the few I will continue to read in what little spare time I have.
    I just have a few points to bring up. I promise they're all technical!
    There are several spots in each of the chapters I've read where there seems to be a glitch or something and several words seem to be lost. This has the tendency of throwing me out of the flow of the story as I try to figure out what the sentence is supposed to say.
    I also noticed in Chapter 7 you wrote
    "Actually, Miss Granger, your theory on the Wolfsbane Potion may bare looking into."
    I think you meant to use the word "bear"
    bare = nekkid
    bear (as a verb) = apply or pertain (reference - Miriam-Webster's online dictionary at m-w.com)
    I don't mean to be an ass; I just noticed and thought you might want to know. Please don't dismember me!

    In other news this really is an enjoyable fic with a really good mix of drama (is he going to go for her?), humor (thank you SO much for introducing The Thong like you did!), angst (Snape ripping himself apart like he does) and lots of learning (Who knew there was a website that described how to tango!).

    Incidentally, I happen to be a November Scorpio and am immensely pleased you decided to put your version of Snape in the same sign. Yes we really are like that. I think that's why I like your Snape so much. I really identify with him. You do an excellent job with making your characters real to your readers.
    Sorry this is way too long. Thanks again for the great story!

    J
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  • From ANON - firewall on January 13, 2006
    Ch 39 I love the way you are letting this story continue on. You've spent so much time adapting the characters to your plot that it would be a shame to have to rebuild them in another story. I like the idea of many more chapters to come.

    Steven, sniff, smarmy little character, isn't he? One down and hundreds to go, indeed! Hermione showed discriminating taste at not going to bed with him.

    The room sounds interesting, not my cuppa, but interesting. I wonder if they'll use the waterfall.

    Thanks for the new chapter. I'm always excited to read a new installment to your work.
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  • From azulkan2 on January 13, 2006
    Woohoo, thank you Pearle. Made my weekend with the update. Glad RL has let you get some writing in. Hoping you feel up to another chapter soon.
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  • From Applekissis on January 13, 2006
    Wonderful story..very entertaining
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  • From ANON - Kl] on January 13, 2006
    awesome update.
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  • From Angie30 on January 13, 2006
    Excellent chapter my dear! Love the "Jungle Room".*grins*
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  • From SataiDelenn on December 17, 2005
    Regarding Chapter 12:

    Pearle,

    I don't remember where, but Severus's birthday is listed as January 9th.

    Just thought you'd want to know.
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