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Reviews for SMOLDERING WITHIN

By : kimberjingle1
  • From ANON - MajinSakuko on August 31, 2004
    WOW! I swear, it's uncanny, I can associate with Harry nearly 100 %, safe only the famous part *LOL* I adore your story and I had so much fun reading it! It was greaun bun but also sad in the right parts! Even the part with the books Harry bought was a bit familiar. I (I'm female) bought "The Joy of Gay Sex" *LOL* in a bookshop ("Lionheart" *LOL*) specialised on gay and lesbian books and videos. The book helps a lot when I'm writing Slash ^^

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  • From ANON - Christina on August 29, 2004
    OMG!!! You need to update as soon as possible!!!! I love your story so much! And Mark sucks... hes a nice guy and all .. but Harry and Draco NEED to be together.. lol. But really I am loving your story!! oh and I love Harry and the leather pants.. Draco has to see him in those... I would love to see Draco's reaction! Please update soon!! Oh and If you would be so kind as to email me when you do that would be so aesome of you .. if you dont have the time or just dont feel like it then thats cool to, Ill keep my eye out. Again, I love the story!
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  • From ANON - wolfsister311 on August 29, 2004
    Oh, thank you! I adore this story. I wasn't satisfied with three chapters, so I've started reading it on your site! It makes me laugh, makes me cry, makes me hot!! The best of all worlds. I look forward to reading your other fics too.

    One question--I can't get all of chapter 14 to load! Is there somewhere else to read it? After starting chapter 15, I realized I missed some important stuff! *pouts* Please help!!


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  • From ANON - caroll on August 27, 2004
    aaaaaaaaah I love you and your storie but now it's 3fucking 47 in the morning here in Belgium and I need my sleeping beauty.
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  • From ANON - caroll on August 27, 2004
    Well first after reading first part or chapter I was really desapointed about the whole "non-draco-but markFlirting" thing then I saw the second chapter andyou know whit curiosity and all...
    so I read it and I feel better but still don't like little Mark here makes me don't want to red the story anymore but Ilove your Harry Shy Potter ...
    Hope you post soon though.
    ps: the sex scene are good.And please no Hoffman-Potter sex.Love ya
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  • From ANON - rwalden52 on August 27, 2004
    This story ranks right up there with the other story you wrote "Summer of Wisdom". This is one of the best stories I have ever read, so detailed, I cried and laughed. Keep up the good work.
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  • From ANON - The Queen of the Damned on August 27, 2004
    That was quite good, can't wait for H/D of course, but well. I really liked tay yay you caractisized (OK, i know the spelling isn't correct but I can't be bothered to take a dictionary at the moment. Lol).
    Anyway, I will deffinately be checking this story for updates ;)
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  • From ANON - DraculUnknown on August 27, 2004
    Oh WOW!! this is the best story i've ever read!!!Im thinking that another chapter is comming? Caz if its harry/draco and right now its harry and that really adorable mark then there has to be other great chapters!! love it! My favorite a now now!!! Keep writing!!Its GREAT!!!
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  • From ANON - Brit on August 27, 2004
    Brilliant start! You are a really good writer and I love this. Can't wait for the next chapter.
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