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Reviews for To Have and To Hold

By : MontanaDan
  • From ANON - lee on October 24, 2004
    very nice.

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    Yeah this is a lame review, but I hate not leaving one at all. I loved their interaction and Draco has me reeling with the possibilities of what he truely knows.

    "Did I just think 'Yummy'?":
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  • From ANON - Inzilbeth on October 24, 2004
    I am enjoying your story very much. I like the use of inner voice, it adds so much to the character and you do a great job of conveying their thoughts. This story is unfolding nicely and I am anxious to see where it goes. Your "smutty scenes" are done very well. l look forward to more to develop between them there too. As for keeping them in bed, I am OK with that, look at it this way, Sev's barriers are really down then. What fun to be had. Seriously, I am looking forward to how Harry's abilities will play out in the story too. I like Ron's reaction, some stories have him freaking out way too much and it is distracting. His acceptance and concern are much more beleivable. Looking forward to more and I also appreciate that yost tst to the group your updates. I have a lousy time keeping up with story updates here. Great job!!
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  • From ANON - Lain Iwakura on October 20, 2004
    Please update soon! I keep returning to this story because of the wonderful characterization and awesome plot ^^. You've done so well with every chapter so far, and I'm sure the next chapter will be no less of an interesting read.
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  • From ANON - xikum on October 14, 2004
    Uhm, yeah.
    You write hot sex, very well!
    Of course, I had to read it over 3 times. Just to be sure. ;-)
    Lovers. Happiness. And Severus inner Slytherin is fun! No guilt, just satisfaction at claiming what is his. Or, rather, who. And Harry just as happy, in his own innocent, whole hearted way.
    I'm Still smiling, Great sex, And a plot that I adore! What more can one ask for?
    I know! More soon?
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  • From ANON - JESS on October 14, 2004
    CAN WE HAVE MORE PLEASE :0
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  • From ANON - Abraxis on October 12, 2004
    A definite thumbs up on the love scene. A double portion of that for everything surrounding it. I will be waiting to see what they come up with to keep LV from marking Draco. I have a feeling that Harry's idea may be the only way - convincing LV that Draco has a chance with him and that a dark mark would ruin it. But, oh my, oh my, Severus isn't going to like that at all. Also woing ing if Draco sees things the same way that Lucius does. You certainly know how to keep things interesting.
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  • From ANON - yana on September 29, 2004
    cool story
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  • From ANON - Arya on September 28, 2004
    Er, what happened with Harry's eyesight? You said it took Snape a long time and several spells to correct Harry's eyesight originally and then, after the potion undid those spells, Harry never got the eyesight restored again. So....I'm confused on that front.

    Other than that, all good. :D
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  • From ANON - Viktoria on September 28, 2004
    I just wanted to say that I am REALLY enjoying your story. You've got the characters down perfect and aren't afraid to go slow in order to build the story and characterizations. Good work! I particularly like hearing Snape's inner voice. Looking forward to more chapters!
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  • From ANON - cdkobasiuk on September 27, 2004
    This fic is very original in presentation if not in general plot. You wrote nicely too and your humor is wonderful.

    cdk
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  • From ANON - J on September 27, 2004
    Oh this is just wonderful! Very real and sexy. I can't wait for the next part.

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  • From ANON - diagonalist on September 27, 2004
    *squees*

    Have just found this and it's marvellous! I love it hugely. Have to say that you are making excellent use of Snape's inner voice, and I consider my confidence in you entirely vindicated. Harry being all cynical and Snape trying to figure him out is always a favorite thing with me, and you've portrayed it beautifully.

    Also the bit where Snape wanked Harry rocked my slashy socks.

    Hope to see more soon, with lots of Snape taking care of Harry and loving him and just being Snapish, much love,

    diagonalist (and this could just be anyone pretending to be me, couldn't it? scary thought)
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  • From ANON - bassclefgirl on September 26, 2004
    This is a fantastic story. I really do hope you continue with it. You have Snape's voice spot-on and it's very interesting getting into his head. Also, for a change, Hermione and Ron's reactions are very believable. In many stories they're either dead-set against the idea of Snape andry ory or blissfully happy for them or too wrapped up in each other to notice/care, but here, they are concerned and maybe Hone one is a little pleased that Harry is feeling better about himself and good about Snape in general.

    I don't like Blaise. I have no idea why. I really hope he doesn't cause trouble for Snape or Harry. And I hope Voldemort doesn't cause any (more) trouble, either.
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  • From ANON - Yih on September 25, 2004
    It goes without saying, that you're a very good writer. All I have to say is that whatevou wou write I seem to be addicted to and this one is no different. Though may I please request a D/H out of you sometime in the near future? This is really good so far. Severus's inner voice is great. Luckily you don't have to contend with the entire SS hating HP matter b/c they've already somehow managed to get close. For your first slash, you've done an excellent job. Although i'm still a bit foggy on what direction you'll be going, but wherever you end up going... I'm going to be hanging on for the ride ^_^.
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  • From ANON - Robert on September 25, 2004
    *bounce, bounce, bounce* Oh, if only Voldemort had just waited a few minutes longer before calling the Death Eaters! I really love your writing, I have to admit this despite it making me insanely jealous. I hope this continues in the cery enjoyable direction that it's been taking so far. You know, there's soemthing about Severus/Harry that is just so... nice!
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