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Reviews for To Have and To Hold

By : MontanaDan
  • From ANON - Abraxis on September 25, 2004
    Loved the scene between Harry and Severus. I like Severus' control. It's much better that they get to really know each other not just jump into bed with all the complications still attached.

    Can't wait to see what trouble Blaise is going to try and stir up.
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  • From ANON - LeeLeePotter on September 25, 2004
    Love the kisses. It seems like it wont be long before their in the sack, but I'm glad for now they didn't jump straight into sex. Severus' thoughts inbetween are great. Sirius bought him a woman? *snort* :)
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  • From ANON - xikum on September 24, 2004
    Nice! Talk about mutuality. This is wonderful! Even better than just one going after the other.
    Interesting how Sirius decided to have Harry introduced to sex...and how sad. It would appear that he's like Draco & Blaise, it's 'just sex'?
    I am concerned about Blaise and Draco, though. Hopefully, not a problem of the nasty sort? It does seem that they are two different approaches to sex...Simple gratification, and meaningful relationship. Which I would guess that the Slytheriant,ant, too, just not yet...they're still into sowing their oats, so to speak? And Sev is older, wiser, and ready for the 'real thing'. Which, due to his sad upbringing, is all Harry really wants in life. Am I guessing it right?

    Hmm. Are they young 'uns such followers? Are they DE's or DE's in training, as most suppose is the direction the 'real' books may go?
    Gods, tho', it is scary to me that when Harry sleeps or is too tired, Voldie can get into his mind. That, I think, would be a real concern, a true put-off.

    Yes, they need to be Very Careful, for more reasons than I ever thought...not to have their relationship be used against them to be blackmailed for information or used sexually, fodder for Voldie to use to trap Harry with... or torture Sev for his duplicity, oh my!
    Great stuff! Please do continue. I was so glad to see another chapter show up!
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  • From ANON - Gaycrow on September 24, 2004
    I'm enjoying this story very much. I like stories where Harry has "extra" ability, plus I like the way you have Snape reacting to his feelings about Harry.

    Looking forward to the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - Emily22 on September 24, 2004
    Fabulous so far, please continue! I am loving it. The interaction is great and Snape's conscience is hilarious. Thanks for the laughs!

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  • From ANON - Bysshe on September 24, 2004
    Wow! I can't believe I had somehow missed the first three chapters of this wonderful story, but I'm so glad I saw the post on After Class about the fourth. This is exactly what I needed! A good, strong WIP with great characterization and excellent writing. Keep up the good work!

    BTW...I mentioned this story on my lj at www.livejournal.com/users/bysshe. I thought my friends list would really enjoy it, if they haven't read it already.

    --bysshe (your newest devoted fangirl)
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  • From ANON - gosia on September 24, 2004
    I wrote my email wrong last time *blushes* I guess it`s because I was so overwhelmed by your brilliant fic ^.^
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  • From ANON - gosia on September 24, 2004
    I just want you to know, that I imagine Severus and Harry the way you describe them in your fic. I love it when Severus is so firm, "dark" and ... funny! I`m waiting for another chapters!
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  • From Phantomtale on September 24, 2004
    Wonderful - I can't wait to see where you're going with the Zabini thing - I can see Snape getting all jealous and possessive Snape - yeay. Oh and I love the blossoming relationship between Harry and Snape, very sweet and sexy.

    "True, Potter had striking features but he usually looked tired and stressed. When he wasn
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  • From ANON - jbcna on September 24, 2004
    that was great love the smut cant wait for more loveing this story!
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  • From ANON - leeleepotter on September 23, 2004
    "Exactly what part of
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  • From ANON - RavenRosebud on September 23, 2004
    I love it so far. Please hurry and write more.
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  • From ANON - Robert on September 22, 2004
    I wasn't sure how much I was going to like this wen I found it, but I think that was mainly because of the summery someone else had written of it. I actually really liked it and I'm enjoying every moment.

    I am a little ashamed to sat that it's taken me about a week to read itbecause I kept being inturrupted and not able to get on the comptuer for a time (bloody work!), but it was well worth the effort.

    The only thing I'm worried about now is the fact that I'm going to forget to check up on whether it's been updated! I would love to read more, and if you can be bothered, e-mailing me to let me kthatthat another chapter is up would be wonderful!

    Keep writing (this is far better than my first slash story!)
    Robert Andrew Frogg
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  • From ANON - Jewel on September 20, 2004
    man o man... wow, just wow. please update asap before i start to cry *eyes get big and watery* hehe
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  • From ANON - Dane on September 15, 2004
    Well done. Crisp, naturally flowing dialog. Very believable eonalonal content. Intriguing characterization of Harry. I did not want to stop reading until I'd finished it.

    Thanks...keep it up.
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