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Reviews for To Have and To Hold

By : MontanaDan
  • From ANON - Jo on September 01, 2004
    This is great, especially for a first story ~ congratulations. There is plot and characterisation, not to mention sensuality. I can't wait to read more!!
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  • From ANON - Lain Iwakura on September 01, 2004
    argh! *Please* get another chapter out soon! You're a terrific author, and this is an equally great fic. Please, please please email me when you update? Please?
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  • From ANON - Lychee on August 31, 2004
    Okay, I just freakin adore 'inner Severus', it makes me think of what he might've been like at Harrys age. Your story is awesome, you have a real way with words. My favorite; "confection covered electricity". Just bloody brilliant. Please write more soon.
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  • From ANON - konneko_nezumi on April 07, 0000
    oh crap! they're actually gonna do it! i must shield my virgin eyes!!! LOL... great chapter! i seriously was blushing half the time though... i'm not much of a hentai... it's just the ratings at ff.net are so strict sometimes... and mediaminer isn't one of my favorite sites... cookies and such... anyway... they're reallie gonna go thru with it... wow... UPDATE! ::drool:: a horny Yuki... i wish I was the one to walk in...

    -konneko-
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  • From ANON - Constance on August 31, 2004
    Love it! Love it! Love it! It's so refreshing to read a story where the author has such a solid command of language and vocabulary. I gotta say I love Snape's inner voice - quite amusing. Can't wait for more.
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  • From ANON - xikum on August 31, 2004
    OMG! I have never said this before, but honey, now I'll just have to go & have wet dreams about Snape.
    I absolutely love your Severus Snape. I do believe you are depicting the best characterization of the heart and soul and mind of that man!
    And I lke your Harry. You aren't doing him weak or overly angsty, but intelligent, earnest, powerful, just a bit naive. I really do think that is something Snape would appreciate about Harry--- I don't think he'd be into a docile wimp, nor an overly angry child. He wants a spirited mate, someone who could be a true partner & companion. Given Harry's interest in him, and Snape's experience, I think he'd get off on being able to mentor him, slowly both helping Harry bring out his true self, and train his power, meanwhile somewhat seducing and shaping him to become his lover and partner. I can see them growing through development of the similar values they do hold, despite the fact that there will always be differences. Perhaps those could be a strength in themselves, each having strengthe that complement and complete the other's gaps, since everyone has weaknesses as well as strengths?
    And Ron was great! "Well, who wouldn't?" JKR did say that Ron was a staunch friend, despite their differences, and I like how you've shown him to be thoughtful enough to balance his instincts. Your Herrmione's the level-headed, bright young woman she is in canon.
    Who could want more? I do--I want lots more of this
    Lovely, lovely fic!!

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  • From ANON - Sianna Silver on August 31, 2004
    I'm really enjoying this fic so far. I can't wait to read more. Keep up the good work.
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  • From ANON - Scarlet on August 31, 2004
    Thank you thank you thank you for updating so fast! The story looks great and I can't wait to see where it's headed.
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  • From ANON - Joanne on August 31, 2004
    WHAT A GREAT CHAPTER CANT WAIT TO FIND OUT WHAT SOME OF THOSE HIDDEN TALENTS ARE JUST LOVING THIS STORY CANT WAIT FOR MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Nicole on August 31, 2004
    Excellent new chapter. I was glad to read that you'll be updating quite often. Can't wait for more!
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  • From ANON - garnet on August 30, 2004
    *snorts* I love your snape, he's so...sooooo slytherin, a smug one at that.

    hope you continue soon!
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  • From ANON - Agnes on August 30, 2004
    Lovely writing!!!!
    Realy; and I'm dying to know how this will continue.....
    Keep it up!

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  • From ANON - Mishap on August 30, 2004

    Oooh! good start, loved the mental voice for Snape. Mooon.oon...please, please, please!
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  • From ANON - Athena on August 30, 2004
    Aww....
    I want more Please!!
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  • From ANON - Carol on August 29, 2004
    This is your first? Wow, I am impressed. I think I'm going to love your Severus and Harry. I enjoyed Snape's inner voice, and I love a protective Snape with Harry. I am looking forward to see where this is going. Puss.
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