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Reviews for To Have and To Hold

By : MontanaDan
  • From ANON - PirateDucky (too lazy to sign in) on August 29, 2004
    I love it! It's a really good plot so far (if there isn't a plot, just ignore my sditydity). The way Harry is made out to be in this story sounds how he would really be after the few years he's had at Hogwartz. I know I'd become a sarcastic bitch after everything, even if it were only in my mind. Anyway, UPDATE SOON PLEASE!
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  • From ANON - xikum on August 29, 2004
    I Love this!! Sev recognizing what he wants, finding an acceptable justification, and going for it with full determination---now that he has ascertained that his attentions would be qiute welcome and reciprocated!
    Yes!! More, plese!
    This is my favorite fantasy premise, yet it is just such a very rare premise---usually Harry has to negotiate a hesitant Sev into the relationship, yet as a past true and current semi-practicing Death Eater (even 'just' a spy), I can't imagine that he would be too shy, once he decided what/who he wanted, and how he could negotiate any little complications to turn out to his benefit. Which he undoubtedly could, as intelligent, cunning, witty and powerfull as he is!
    Again, Yes! I am sooo Happy you are writing this! More soon, please?
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  • From ANON - Scar on December 07, 2004
    I love the way you write Snape and Harry! Don't take forever to update! You'll kill me.
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  • From ANON - Evelyn on August 29, 2004
    Wow. Just..wow. That was amazing. I need more, please!
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  • From ANON - Hannah on August 29, 2004
    Brilliant. I normally don't do this, just reviewing so you update.
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  • From ANON - Ellen on August 28, 2004
    Very Good! Continue continue continue! And SOON!
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  • From ANON - Rob K on August 28, 2004
    I really enjoyed your first chapter. i'm am looking forward to seeing where you take this.
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 28, 2004
    hey...awesome!!! you need encouragment?? it was great!!! love the sarcastic harry!!! i dont usually get this into a story but damn i was disappointed when i got to the end and realized it was only the one chapter...i realllllly hope you're not going to take 6 months to post a second chapter.
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  • From ANON - LunaPL on August 28, 2004
    One word: more. Well, first chapter is promising. When will be next?
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  • From ANON - Read300300 on August 28, 2004
    AWESOME!!! I totally love it!!! Please, please continue it?!?!?! I beg you!!! *gets down on her knees and looks up at you, pouting* I'll cry if you don't....
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  • From ANON - Feli on August 28, 2004
    Awww, this is so sweet... I really hope that you will continue writing this story, and that you will update quickly! I love your characterisation of both Harry and Severus. Please keep up the good work, you're doing wonderfully!
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  • From ANON - leeva on August 28, 2004
    awesome story..please continue it!!

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  • From ANON - KNW on August 28, 2004
    Excellent start, you caught the characters perfectly. Congratulations on not making Harry seem weak, even if he is a victim. You're the first person whose writing has made me want to bother reviewing on this site, think that says a lot, so keep up the good work. Definitely have talent for writing, and talent for this fandom and pairing.
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  • From ANON - Jo on August 28, 2004
    That was GREAT! and hot and I can't wait for Chapter 2!!
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  • From ANON - Lychee on August 28, 2004
    "Merlin, he's been reduced to cliches." That was brilliant! Oh, do please continue. Besides the lovely thought of much snogging and shagging, I want to see what talents Harry's been hiding from everyone.
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