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Reviews for To Have and To Hold

By : MontanaDan
  • From ANON - Aunt Bijou on April 22, 2005
    No, no, no, no!!! You can't stop here!! ooooo evil, evil, you are evil!!! And good! Mustn't forget, you are gooood! Please, keep going, and update soon! I don't think my poor abused ticker can take more of this!
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  • From ANON - nerak on April 22, 2005
    you updated!!!! i can't wait till the next chapter!!!

    not just in this chp but throughout the whole fic, i just LOVE severus' inner voice. it's sad and satisfying at the same time that you're wrapping up this wonderful piece! hoho nice way for voldie to die. and i'll say that's just punishment for zabini. hmm can't wait...
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  • From ANON - Sailor Sol (too damn lazy to sign in) on April 02, 2005
    YOU SADISTIC LITTLE @)*%)@(*%)(@&%)(@!!!!!!!

    How DARE you use a cliffhanger like that! AAAAGGGGHHH!!!

    Sorry, I lost my cold-blooded calm for a moment. I'm better now.


    more?

    please?
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  • From foxracerchick129 on March 30, 2005
    Bloody Hell you have me caught on this story... PLEASE update soon!!!
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  • From ANON - The Siren on March 28, 2005
    I've been reading this story for awhile now, but never knew you could review without having an account on this site. Oh, well. I'll make up for lost time. I am loving this story! It has such excellent character development and plot! I do hope you continue soon. I'm not sure if I could wait as long as I did last time for an update.
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  • From ANON - antipyro on March 17, 2005
    Please post soon or tell me where the story is posted.

    You are an amazing writer. All the little details make is sooooo delicious, but it's your writing of the intimate connection and passion Severus and Harry have for each other that make me lust for more. I'm enthralled.

    Ohhh, the rapture, it's soooo captivating. I can't read anything else.


    antipyro
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  • From ANON - kk on March 15, 2005
    ahhhhhhh oh no!!!! what are they going to do?? and someone skewer and bbq zabini please!

    =D i'm so hooked. no wild monkey sex? right snape, keep on telling your self that.


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  • From ANON - eve/roarke on March 14, 2005
    I really love this story, your writing just keeps getting better, but just at this moment I wish I could do to you what
    you had Harry do to Blaize.

    There should be a law, a commitee should be set up, we need banners stating "fanfic writers must not be cruel to
    fanfic readers", because there is no doubt you are being cruel Montana you've finished this chapter on such a cliffie
    that the mountain is subsiding with the weight of readers expectations.

    Please update soon. very soon, I'm on my knees begging.
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  • From ANON - shelly101 on March 14, 2005
    omg, that was amazing! Blaise=bastard. Excellent job! please update more soon!! thanks
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  • From ANON - Justajester on March 14, 2005
    Oh, Teh Voldster is too evil for yo-ou
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  • From ANON - ljeanne134 on March 13, 2005
    Alright, so I'm addicted to this story. Please, please, please post another chapter soon! (I really want the rest of the story, but a chapter will make me happy for now) I hope that Draco and Severus figure out a way to keep Harry from going to Voldemort, but maybe Harry will be able to defeat the smarmy ho once and for all!
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  • From ANON - Legolas on March 13, 2005
    OH MY GOSH!!!

    I can't wait to see where this is going to go. You have to get the next chapter up soon. I wish it was complete already so I could read on and see what is going to happen next. Please update soon.


    Peace
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  • From ANON - Amaya on March 13, 2005
    I have been meaning to review this story forever. I really like it. I love stories that show Harry as someone more complex. Trying to hide all of his pain and problems from everyone, and dealing with them all alone. Giving him more intelligence and skills with magic also made me happy.

    Having Snape hear Harry conversation in the beginning was so great. =^_^= It is so cute how Snape takes care of him and keeps giving him potions that make him pass out. And even cuter how Harry still tries to run away. I love how it starts off with the intense kissing. The sex is great. It is always fun when it is a little rough.

    Making Draco and his father not really evil made me happy. ^_^ The kissing scene between Draco and Harry was great. I love seeing Snape jealous. ^_^!

    The voice in his head was a good touch. ^_^ I believe I have read the story you got the idea from.

    It has been so long since I have read the story I have forgotten a lot of the details of it. @_@ Poor Harry though. That was horrible how Zabini beat him up while he was tied down and defenseless. :( I was kind of looking forward to what Voldemort had planed for him. *sniffs* Oh well I am sure he will get the rest of his deserved punishment by the end of the story.

    Keep updating, your story is great!!! ^_^
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  • From ANON - sweetteetwo on March 13, 2005
    I think that this fic is outstanding.
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  • From ANON - Kateri on March 13, 2005
    Uh oh, I guess the plan backfired. Great chapter, loved every minute of it
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