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Reviews for To Have and To Hold

By : MontanaDan
  • From ANON - jbcna on March 13, 2005
    wow this is getting good cant wait to find out what happends next!!!
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  • From on March 12, 2005
    Love your fic *giggles* please e-mail me whenever you update soon!!!
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  • From ANON - Lindsey on March 11, 2005
    Just want to say how much I'm enjoying this story. It's well-written, and the characters stick fairly close to canon, considering. I only have one critism, (constructive!), and it's that there are numerous typos throughout the story. Not little things like 'i' before 'e' but entire words and phrases that have been mashed together. These typos greatly disrupt the flow of the story, and sometimes it is difficult to discern what exactly you meant to say. I've copy-pasted two example from about 3/4 through chapter 5:

    "Green eyes snapped back to meet and and y loy looked ready to either shy away or explode. Severus
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  • From ANON - serenity chair on March 04, 2005
    Please dont let that dickhead Blaise rape Harry! PLEASE!!!! I love him being so innocent! If he gets raped i'm never ever ever goint to read your work again! Now that thats over, i love your stoy your begining was really awesome! I also love the way Serverus thinks to himself and how he's always complamenting Harry and i love harry's firey spirt! i dont really like that he's gonna bottom too but, what can you do? Please keep writing and i'll keep reeiwing!
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  • From ANON - Ferris_girl on February 25, 2005
    Thank you so much for letting me know the fic continued here. I know it was Blaise you hexed Harry just now. I can't wait to see what will happen next chapter. Ooooh I love possessive Snape. I hope he makes Blaise bleed.... a lot. lol The story is great.
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  • From ANON - steffles24 on February 23, 2005
    Nice tying together of agendas. Gives us readers an idea of what's going on with Dumbledore, Lucius, and Draco. Too bad it looks like Blaise in determined to be shallowly interfere. Can't wait to find out what what happens to Harry with Blaise and if anyone (Draco, Severus) will be able to save him.
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  • From ANON - kuramanya on February 22, 2005
    Recently I decided to reread To Have and To Hold and noticed that on chapter 3, Snape and Harry are snogging and suddenly the scene changes to Harry talking to Hermione and Ron about the trustworthiness of Snape? Is parts of the fic misplaced or missing? I'm also interested if you are posting this fic elsewhere? A Big Fan.
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  • From ANON - Anon on February 20, 2005
    i could cry
    some of your story is missing
    please fix it and up date soon
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  • From ANON - Ruth on February 13, 2005
    oh no!!!
    Harry has been hit by a spell....im quessing it was blaise... :(
    oh dear, oh dear....
    cant wait for more!!
    XxX

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  • From ANON - lykos on February 12, 2005
    Were you sorted into Slytherin? How can you end a chapter like that? You are evil. Evil, evil, EVIL!

    I've been following this story for a good few months, but this is my first time commenting. I just wanted to say that this is one of the best Snape/Harry fics I've read and I love your treatment of the characters. They may be performing out of character tasks at times, but it certainly doesn't feel that way. They still act very much like themselves in situtations that they wouldn't find themselves in normally, especially Snape. I love his internal monologue. Keep up the great work and for the love of all that is sacred, PLEASE update quickly! I don't know if I can stand not knowing what happened to Harry (though I have a pretty bad feeling about it).
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  • From ANON - DH on February 10, 2005
    I love the fic so far, but sometimes it seems some words are missing or globbed together. I would advise using a spell check or finding a beta to read it over. (If you don't have one, you can email yourself in Yahoo mail, and use the free spellcheck option there!)

    I don't mean to be nosey because I AM reading the fic for the STORY, not for the spelling or grammar or whatnot, but it does sometimes mess with the plot, in my opinion, if I am not certain exactly what a character said or did. It's distracting.

    I love the inner voice of Snape, and how he snuck in on him making that potion! Beautiful scene with the kiss! Can't wait to read the next chapter.


    DH
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  • From ANON - Hambares on February 10, 2005
    Thank you for your great story! I have enjoyed each new chapter.
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  • From ANON - Hambares on February 10, 2005
    Thank you for your great story! I have enjoyed each new chapter.
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  • From ANON - Lils on February 10, 2005
    AAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHH!!!

    poor Harry..
    what will happen, no that Blaise has him? (and it is Blaise, isn't it?)

    please write more soon :D :D
    thx :)

    Lils
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  • From ANON - eve/roarke on February 10, 2005
    Let me start by confirming that I love this story, to leave us the readers on a cliffie like this is very cruel, to help
    our suffering you need to update soon, very soon, PLEASE.

    Now one of the reasons I really enjoy this story was that Harry was strong and in control, he knew more than the
    rest, now we have Severus and I understand that he's scared becuase finally he has Severus but he was incontrol
    now he's waiting and being told by others.
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