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Reviews for To Have and To Hold

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  • From ANON - Ruth on November 14, 2004
    im realli enjoying this story, but i have to say that its very hard to read. There are a lot of spelling mistakes and there seem to be lines/paragraphs missing. the second chapter appers to be a cross-post from another story.
    i cant wait for the next chapter, and i think it would be a good idea to re-read over the whole story and repost the bits that ahve obviously gone wrong somehow.
    XxX
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  • From ANON - Ruth on November 14, 2004
    im realli enjoying this story, but i have to say that its very hard to read. There are a lot of spelling mistakes and there seem to be lines/paragraphs missing. the second chapter appers to be a cross-post from another story.
    i cant wait for the next chapter, and i think it would be a good idea to re-read over the whole story and repost the bits that ahve obviously gone wrong somehow.
    XxX
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  • From ANON - Ruth on November 14, 2004
    im realli enjoying this story, but i have to say that its very hard to read. There are a lot of spelling mistakes and there seem to be lines/paragraphs missing. the second chapter appers to be a cross-post from another story.
    i cant wait for the next chapter, and i thinki wold be a good idea to re-read over the whole story and repost the bits that ahve obviously gone wrong somehow.
    XxX
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  • From ANON - abraxis on November 10, 2004
    Still beautifully hot and heavy! Severus and his inner snark still blowing me away.

    I am waiting anxiously to see what they do to save Draco. If they don't revert to Harry's previous plan I can't imagine what you'll surprise me with.

    Loving it, loving it. More, please, soon.
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  • From ANON - cdkobasiuk on November 01, 2004
    Still realy great chapters. I wonder what will happen with the Malfoys next?

    cdk
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  • From ANON - beth on November 01, 2004
    Wow. Great Chapter. I love this story and I can't wait for more. I was just re-reading chapter 1 last night and this morning there's chapter 7! It made my morning. Keep it up!

    Beth
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  • From ANON - manx on November 01, 2004
    Ok, I didn't want you to think that I only had criticism. Along with. apparently, everyone else on Earth, I think this story is awesome! I sooooo love Sev's inner voice. I'm glad they didn't jump into sex right away, because all those kissing scenes are so hot!!
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  • From ANON - leeroy on November 01, 2004
    love them. love this. great chapter, great blowjob..made me wriggle in my chair. *shiver* yum I also enjoy when severus says things like harry not being able to remember his name when he wants him to beg. love your sev. *snort* and him thinking back to the last time he used his shampoo. David? ha!
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  • From ANON - Manx on November 01, 2004
    Where did you get the idea that there was no such thing as a black panther!?!? Most panthers ARE black!! Maybe you sh hav have said a black lion---now that is unheard of.
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  • From Weirkat on November 01, 2004
    I do so love this story. ~Grins~ You're doing a wonderful flow over the story, and keep my interest.
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  • From ANON - meine on October 31, 2004
    so hot sooo hot
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  • From ANON - lilop on October 25, 2004
    This is excellent! I love possessive Snape. Can't wait to see what evil things Blaise is planning
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  • From ANON - Jinx on October 24, 2004
    This story is wonderful. I love it. ~S~ I hope to see the next chapter soon.
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  • From ANON - xikum on October 24, 2004
    Mmm, lovely. Hot sex and a 'power the Dark Lord knows not'. The sensuousness, togetherness, and what Sev said to Harry was so true---He kept it to salient points, did not criticize excessively or hold the anger overlong---though, Harry's timely kissing sure did help a lot!
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  • From ANON - Lain Iwakura on October 24, 2004
    w00t! I'm so glad that you updated! I was nearly desolate with no update from one of my favorite writers *~*. You've done fantastically on yet another chapter, and I hope you get #7 up soon!
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