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Reviews for Affairs of the Dangerous Hearts

By : DracoMalfoysLover
  • From ANON - Anon on January 05, 2006

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  • From ANON - Daisy and Luigi on August 07, 2005
    Im enjoying this fic, its a shame that you are not getting many reviews. I'm not much older than you myself and I know where you're comnig from. Don't be disheartened by lack of reviewers. My old stories got the odd review now and again but as long as your happy with what you've written then it's good enough. look at your hit points, it shows that people are reading and are probably coming back for more. so dont give up! ^_^

    Keep up with your good work. I've read your other fics and even though I've not reviewed (which is naughty of me) I am continueing to read them because they are worth my time. Well done. keep it up.

    Daisy and Luigi
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  • From DracoMalfoysLover on September 12, 2004
    Hey,
    Thanks for your review once again. You seem to be the only one reviewing. lol. I'm glad you like my story. i don't write to well as i am only 16 years old. Please do keep reading. It might or might not get better for you. i do not know.

    From Dracomalfoyslover or Sarah
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  • From WriterLady1031 on September 12, 2004
    Hey, ks fks for clearing that up for me. I've always hated word puzzles! LOL, but you did an excellent job with the explanation.

    Now, chapter five was interesting. I think it's cute to see Dumbledore playing matchmaker for his granddaughter and Severus. This story is beginning to take shape very nicely. I'll be back for more--keep writing! ^_^
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  • From DracoMalfoysLover on September 11, 2004
    Hi, thanks for ur review. I thought that I had fixed up the first chapter but I guess I hadn't, thanks for telling me. Dumbledore is her grand father, her mothers father. He was like a father to her in the way that he would look afted spd spend time with her, since her real father (Voldemort) had not. I hope you kind of understand now.
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  • From WriterLady1031 on September 10, 2004
    This is interesting. The story is off to a good start, but there was con confusion. In chapter one, Amelia says that Albus is her uncle. Then in chapter three she says that he is her grandfatas was well as in chapter four. However, in that same chapter, she says the he was like a father. Now, I've got a higher than average IQ, but that was confusing as hell. Can you clear that up? Also, you might want to put breaks in between the lines in your dialogue-- it's a little hard on the eyes.

    Definitely keep writing this one. Don't give up because you'ot got gotten many reviews. You've got something good here with this one, so keep going. ^_^
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