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  • From ANON - lovethelab on February 11, 2005
    awesome chapter. so much tension and drama. glad that snape told hermione he loved her - maybe it will help during their seperation.
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  • From ANON - Lu Ling Qi on February 11, 2005
    I must say i am appaled at the path you took but nonetheless it is attention grabbing, although appaled i love it and wish form more updates soon!
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  • From ANON - Lu Ling Qi on February 11, 2005
    I must say i am aplaed at the path you took but nonetheless it is attention grabbing
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  • From ANON - Innogen on February 11, 2005
    Oh no! Snape got sacked! What will Hermione do to Dumbledore. Go on the warpath?

    Innogen

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  • From ANON - Joanna Scarlett on February 10, 2005
    Oh shit! Didn't see that coming. Great chappie.
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  • From ANON - Nyxx on February 07, 2005
    I can't read anymore! My eyes are tired, and the constant erratic errors are grating on my nerves. Have you, as the author, ever proof read your work? You use adult terminology and you write splendid metaphors, yet sentences like this: "And yet, Her Hermione dtt thought it wawas a hopeless cause." seems to be a reoccurring error. Seems innocent enough... but chapter after chapter of the same errors gets a tad bit INFURIATING. The plot is a little odd, and too slow to take off in any interesting direction. (It may have gotten interesting after ch. 5, but I cannot press myself to finish) Does Hermione really have to be mental? She has never struck me as the obsessive compulsive type. Drastically skewing the characters seems to be a popular trend with fan fiction. A love starved, insecure, or sadist Severus... And a neurotic, obsessive, nympho Hermione. I think the next string of fan fiction to grace the web will depict Hermione as anorexic and Severus a truly caring soul that helps her recover. Honestly... Severus is a dick, that is no facade we see him put on for the sake of Draco as his fathers junior informant, as many Potter fans believe. Severus delights in being a sarcastic prick, he is not a closet kindred soul. Is this not what you love about him? Is Hermione not rational, intelligent, or well balanced enough to be depicted as sane? Is that not what you love about her? I feel rather cranky... Whether it is a result of sleep deprivation or a cumulative disappointment in fan fiction as a whole, I know not. *Sigh* I'm going to bed.
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  • From ANON - Expected Aberrance on February 02, 2005
    Wow. Really rough and disturbing chapter. Well-written as always, and heart-wrenching. Can't say that I exactly enjoyed reading it, but it definitely had an emotional kick to it. I'm almost afraid to look forward to your next post, it's that good. Thanks.
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  • From ANON - Jen on January 31, 2005
    This is a great fic, though I thought you would like to know that it seems like a good portion of chapter 10 is missing. Just letting you know, anyways keep posting this wonderful work!
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  • From ANON - nesscafe on January 29, 2005
    What a disturbing, dark, and well writen story. I can't believe how much I've enjoyed reading it. Maybe enjoy is the wrong word... It's not an enjoyable story, but the story is compelling and it's interesting. I really hope to read more soon!
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  • From ANON - AJS on January 22, 2005
    This is such a *satisfying* story. So much to take in that I constantly have to re-read sections to make sure I haven't missed what you are trying to say. Wonderful, thank you both.
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  • From ANON - gothchiq on January 21, 2005
    Yummy! more please :)
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  • From ANON - revel on December 16, 2004
    WOW, So for what i've read is amazing and its great to hear (read) that its finished.
    I'm having a slight problem fully loading some of the chapters - Are they archived anywhere else?

    Cheers :)
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  • From ANON - ranegrrrl on December 15, 2004
    Wonderful. Consistently poetic and beautiful. I look forward to every update.
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  • From ANON - selened on December 12, 2004
    I've just caught up to this story today. It's a little strong in places for my taste, but well-written. I'll definitely be watching for an update.
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  • From ANON - angie on December 11, 2004
    Worth the wait, as usual. Can't wait for next chapter and see what you've come up with.
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