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Reviews for Stone Angels

By : StarlightSoul
  • From ANON - June on December 15, 2004
    Ch 7 - nice to see an update! Will Hermione ask Severus for help in getting the other items on her list? Or perhaps she could ask Snape to be her sister's guardian - he's old enough. I almost expected Hermione's sister to be a Parseltongue, as she got along well with Poe.
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 14, 2004
    this is a good story!
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  • From ANON - lala4467 on November 24, 2004
    I love the story but get very distracted by the spelling and grammatical errors. I have a feeling you are like me and have a really hard time motivating yourself to reread your own work. There are tons of great betas out there, take advantage of them, or at least look over it please. I think that the quality of the writing is superb, I look forward to reading more. Thanks!
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  • From ANON - Avanell on November 18, 2004
    Love this...cannot wait to see the coupling and the healing as well. oh, and the strenght between them all bonding. brilliant work here. on the personal side, love the ballet - am former sfballet student and still have ballet as a hobby. love stories where hermione dances (waiting for her to dance as several plays violin). Maybe she'll dance more in upcoming chapters? how will sev react? hopefully we'll see more soon?
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  • From ANON - cdkobasiuk on November 17, 2004
    This story is incredible. I love how you write all your characters.

    cdk
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  • From ANON - NightQueen on November 15, 2004
    OMG!!! Thank you for updating!!!! One chapter more incredible, heartfelt and beautifully written than the last. This is at the top of my favorite Fics list. This was just such a wonderful chapter I don't seem to have the words to do it justice. Absolutely amazing.
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  • From ANON - Gardengrrl13 on November 06, 2004
    I don't know what to say about your story besides, the obvious... Update soon!

    You're right, child abuse is more common than anyone realizes. Because people turn a blind eye to it, or don't recognize the symptoms, it goes unnoticed, untreated and unavenged until too late in most cases. I will be interested to read how the kids heal their wounds and the bit about Hermione being from a noble family is very fitting. Keep writing, and again... Update update update!!!
    *Hugs*
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  • From ANON - lollupop on November 01, 2004
    i really like this story i really want to know what happens next so plz update soon.
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  • From ANON - Alpha on October 28, 2004
    Wow.
    -- You've got the stage set now for your story.
    -- The abuse situations, I am very sad to say, are realistic. I am in the US and this happens.
    -- Some minor spelling nits, Petunia Evans, apparate.
    -- Love that Arianna can see auras.
    -- What will be the impact of Hermione realizing she is not a true muggle? How will this impact her relationships with other muggleborn?
    I like this story. Please keep writing.
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  • From ANON - Fury on October 28, 2004
    My friend, your plot line is wonderful, though dark. All five chapters so far are quite compelling. But you *really* need to get yourself a good beta if you don't have one already. The grammar mistakes that pepper the text take away from it's quality. Oh and check your "Potterverse" terms: it's *Apparate* (like apparition) *not* Aperate and the name was "Evans" not "Evens" to name a few.

    Don't take this poorly, like I said you're writing a great plot, just get someone to clean up the text (grammar and conjuga), h), hmm?
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  • From ANON - Shiro Ryu on October 27, 2004
    This is a fantastic story! I am glad that you updated. I look forward to your next installment! ^_^
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  • From ANON - NightQueen on October 27, 2004
    Thank you so much for updating! I truly missed this tale. My heart aches for the girls! Severus and the others are amazing!!!! By the end of the chapter My heart broke for Draco!! Not sure what you don't like about this chapter. I thought it was well done!! I look forward to reading more!
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  • From ANON - SnapesMistress005 on September 26, 2004
    amazing story really. you more often see abuse from the father's side, so it coming from a mother is a refreshing change. here's hoping for a quick update!
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  • From ANON - Ctherinrabb on September 26, 2004
    Great story so far ... I do hope you'll keep it up.
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  • From ANON - NightQueen on September 26, 2004
    I just now discovered this treasure of a story!!! I don't think I've felt this many emotions in one sitting while reading a story in a very long time!!! Beautifully written, with intense emotion and fabulous character detail. I've loved every second!! I truly hope you post the next chapter soon!!! Simply amazing!
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