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By : Afterfire
  • From tanyaflorio on March 30, 2010
    PLEASE PLEASE FINISH THIS STORY PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - kat on August 04, 2006
    this is an awesome story, I had to laugh at Hermione's parents! Too true for parents of a siingle child!!! HA HA HA
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  • From ANON - Redlightspin on August 01, 2006
    love it it's funny
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  • From ANON - joanna on August 01, 2006
    This chapter was longer and a bit boring. Lunch was awkward and nothing really interesting happens beside Hermione's hicky. That was embarassing. So where is this story going? I mean, what happnes now?
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  • From ANON - sanaa on July 31, 2006
    hehe omg imagine Draco Malfoy eating with his fingers oh my hilarious.........nice chap keep em coming...oooh i like the possessive thing Draco had going- i mean they're not even together
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  • From ANON - BuckyKattGirl on July 31, 2006
    Abso-Positively Delish! Please update soon! PleasePleasePlease!
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  • From ANON - shalamonde16 aka lala on July 30, 2006
    "She watched as Draco set his fork aside and picked up a chip gingerly between two fingers and bit into it, his face tight. He finished the chip and then reached for another one with a smile that made him look as though he were sneaking a cookie out of the cookie jar before dinner instead of eating chips with his fingers."

    LOL

    This chappie absolutely cracked me up.

    I needed it too, especially after reading a dramione fic earlier that left me feeling... I dunno... empty? hollow? any word you can think of synonymous to a state beyond the point of sadness and regret/grief... enough with the theatrics...

    no, but really I liked this chapter. it made me feel better.
    ps.. I realize I'm babbling...sorry.. ahehehe
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  • From ANON - tank on July 30, 2006
    i just started reading this story and i really enjoy how draco and hermione interact, i also find the arkwardness in the relationship to be refreshing. Please keep writing!
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  • From ANON - Given2Fly on July 30, 2006
    Draco coming out from his father's shadow and being a bit OOC makes sense. ;)

    I particularly liked the part where he started eating his chips with his fingers and looked like a little boy who was sneaking cookies before dinner! LoL I could SO picture that.

    Keep up the good work, poppet!
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  • From ANON - Stag on July 30, 2006
    I liked your characterization of Hermione's parents - they really seemed English. I don't get that in a lot of fics. It's becoming really promising.
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  • From ANON - sanaa on July 28, 2006
    Nice! omg i can just about Hermione's embarrassment - i wud die if my parents came over and found a guy there update soon plz
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  • From ANON - sanaa on July 28, 2006
    heheh nice chap great start
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  • From ANON - samantha [not signed in] on July 27, 2006
    lolz, thank you for e-mailing me. and yes you are right, i have to go to work tomorrow, which is my birthday, lolz. anyways this chapter is excellent and i can't wait for the next one.
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  • From ANON - joanna on July 27, 2006
    Another great chapter! Luv the conversations between John and Helen Granger. They were fabulous!
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  • From ANON - shalamonde16 aka lala on July 27, 2006
    beautifulyl done. I couldn't help but chuckle at the irnoy, at the awkwardness of it all... LOL

    good job and keep 'em comin...
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