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By : pidge
  • From ANON - Shampoo on January 30, 2005
    Highly powerful scene to leave off at. I'm impressed...and I can't wait to read more.
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  • From ANON - annalumos (not logged in) on January 25, 2005
    *Shocked* What a harsh wake up call for Titan. Well, if this get him talking with his family and maybe reconcillating, then good. One question? How 'does' he find out? Was that a dream he saw or what?
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  • From ANON - Juri on January 24, 2005
    Damn, poor Titan! What a horrible thing to find out. I definitely no longer dislike the kid after that. Now I'm dying here!! I beg you to update as soon as humanly possible so I can read how Titan reacts to what he experienced. What a cliffhanger!
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  • From ANON - saintthistle on January 24, 2005
    Yet another great chapter! The tension in the family is very well written, I hope it all works out for Christmas and that Hermione and Titan can finally talk about it. Please keep going and update soon :)
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  • From ANON - erin kite on January 17, 2005
    wow, phew, drama drama drama. that was intense right there. but i loved it. i cant wait till you update again. love love loved it.
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  • From ANON - DrkMnComikker on January 16, 2005
    Hey, what about me? I reviewed!

    And I KNEW IT!!!

    TITAN!! NOOO!!! HE'S TURNING INTO LUCIUS, AND IT'S ALL HER FAULT!!!!
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  • From ANON - thelorelei on January 16, 2005
    Hurrah! You've made such a wonderful story, and I adore Charlie... this is gorgeous work...
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  • From ANON - Kimberly on January 15, 2005
    Why doesn't anyone like Titan? Poor thing he could just break your heart. He's so confused. All step children go through a phase like his at some point. He needs to be told the truth about his father. Then he might understand his mom's feelings and Charlie's attitude. Please have Hermione tell him soon or now that Ron is at school too people will ask to many questions and he'll hear it from the wrong person. Please?

    And if you can't tell from the rambling above.....I really like this story of yours. It's got a great plot, doesn't drag on, and is well written. Thank you.
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  • From ANON - Heather on January 15, 2005
    OMFG! you need to keep writing!!! only every so often do i come across a story on here with some actuall plot and drama, its so refreshing!!! i look very much forward to reading your next chapter! :)
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  • From ANON - Juri on January 14, 2005
    Aw, I feel really bad for Titan now. I'll stop disliking the kid since I know it's growing pains and all kids his age are pains in the ass. Lol. Still, he's going to be so crushed when he finally finds out the truth of his birth. Maybe it'll help him appreciate Charlie more though. I hope. *Crosses fingers*
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  • From annalumos on January 14, 2005
    Whoa, drama filled chapter! And I really don't hate Titan, I just wonder (and worry) he has Lucius Malfoy tendencies. That would be scary and really cruel to poor Hermione. I want Titan to be good!! Really! Awesome story. ^_^
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  • From ANON - saintthistle on January 14, 2005
    Wow, that chapter was amazing! Please update again soon, I love this story.
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  • From ANON - DrkMnComikker on January 11, 2005
    Hey! Back again! Why the long wait? I WANTED MORE STORY!!

    Does this mean Hermione is going to tell Titan how he came to be? If so, I just KNOW Titan will be devastated.

    And i plan on being a regular from here out, os expect to see more of my lovely face.
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  • From ANON - annalumos(not logged in) on January 07, 2005
    Loved it!!! It's real interesting to see how Charlie and Malfoy still despise one another and Hermione practices as mediator. And Charlie and Hermione...aw! Too sweet. I look forward to reading more.
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 07, 2005
    Is Titan going to turn out to be a little bastard like his father? I hope not, although he's acting like one. Still, could be just displaying childlike behavior. Hmm...
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