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By : pidge
  • From ANON - laceyweasley on November 25, 2004
    Great Chapter. I was wondering when she would fall to pieces.

    By the way thanks. You're one of the few that seems to like CONTRACTS.
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  • From ANON - erin kite on November 21, 2004
    it just keeps getting better and better! its been a while since i read it last, so it was great to have more than one chapter to read at a time. i love it as always! and draco, well hes just getting more and more likeable isnt he? i just, i just cant explain how much i like this story! i cannot wait till the next installment. thanks
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  • From MidnightLilly on November 19, 2004
    Draco's really nice to Hermione, for her son I would've taken the money so he could have a good life. She needs to start planning for him, babies need a lot of stuff she needs to find a suitable place for them to live and try to find a job.
    Draco should give her one of the many Malfoy houses they own.
    She needs to grow up and accept what's happend to her, Harry and Ron wouldn't want her to mourn so long, they would want her to live on for them.
    Draco just so badly wants to be a great big brother, she should give him a chance to spoil little Titan.
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  • From laceyweasley on November 15, 2004
    That last bit was very insightful.

    You are a very talented story teller.
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  • From MidnightLilly on November 15, 2004
    She has nothing to be ashamed of.
    I hate those idiots that think babies just appear out of thin air or you have to be married to have a child.
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  • From laceyweasley on November 15, 2004
    That last bit was very insightful.

    You are a very talented story teller.
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  • From ANON - Iria on November 14, 2004
    Hermione's showing now, how long before everyone knows her business? Hmm...
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  • From ANON - Juri on November 14, 2004
    Brilliant as always...one question? What the heck is up with the baby dreams? Do they have a special meaning to them? A good meaning or a bad meaning? Or is Hermione just crazy hormonal like my pregnant sister is? Lol.
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  • From ANON - erin kite on November 10, 2004
    ok, awwwwwwwwww! ahem, sorry, done now. that was sooooo...etc. sweet. yeah yeah, i know they had to die, boo hiss, such is life, life goes on, yadda yadda yadda. hermione and charlie's relationship is so sweet. i love the way its progressing. and draco, i love you you portray him. you really get to see a side of him that you didnt think existed. and that he only really shows this side to hermione shows howh heh he really cares about her. they seem like they should be together, but i guess i shall see. lovin it and as always, cant wait til next chapter!
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  • From ANON - Nee on November 09, 2004
    I love how the story has progressed. Charlie is so tender and understanding! I hope Hermione stays with him. I don't quite like Draco getting into the picture, but I guess you do need the conflict to keep us all guessing. This has really evolved -- I reviewed a while ago a thi think you have a great gift for storytelling. You just need a really good editor;) Sometimes the errors can mask over the real quality here, and that's a shame. I'd edit the story but it's so very long now and I think it'd take a long time. Maybe paste it into MS WOrd and let it spell check -- I'm sure you can easily fix a few things that way without even needing a beta. But overall, the plot is excellent. I'm so glad to see one of the "lesser Weasleys" having more to say and do. :) Please update soon!
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  • From ANON - Juri on November 09, 2004
    Another wonderful chapter! I just loved Charlie is so crazy in love with Hermione. And she with him...if they'd admit it! *Sigh* :)


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  • From ANON - eve/roarke on November 09, 2004
    I've only just located your story, and have read all 20 chapters at once, it is really great, the story line had me
    in tears, over Ron and Harry, plus poor Hermione's ordeal with Lucius. Am rooting for Charlie, but Bill seems to
    be in the background too. Draco seems taken with Ginny, I personally like that combination.

    My daughter is in College at the moment, she also has dyslexia, she also writes fanfics, like I tell her, you should
    be proud of your story, a high achievement.
    5 stars please update soon.
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  • From ANON - Iria on November 08, 2004
    Awww! I'm such a girl...anyway, everythings all good this chapter around and I'm glad Hermione and Charlie made up. I'm even glader (is that even a word?) that your version of Draco is so cool. ^_~
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  • From ANON - erin kite on November 07, 2004
    wow, this just keeps getting better and better. i absolutely LOVE where this is going. im still sad that harry and ron had to die, but youre plot just wouldnt work without the heartache of it. anyways, once again, i absolutely love it. cant wait till the next chapter as always. thanks
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  • From ANON - inuyashas_babys_mama on November 06, 2004
    Omg i gosh i luv this story so much. 1 becasue im dyslexic 2 i luv Hermoine luv fics and 3 you r a great wrietr.
    But the story is so hurtful i wanna cry plz dont let draco and charlie fight over hermoine. I Creid when ron and harry died its horrible.
    you r really goofd keep up the great work
    ~
    The diva
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