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Reviews for Broken Smile

By : pidge
  • From ANON - Darkus on November 06, 2004
    I really, really love this story. It's a sweet plot, well written, and very enjoyable. The problem is, all of the spelling and punctuation errors are driving me nuts! Every time I come across one, it throws me out of its flow. Please use spell check or have someone else look at it for any mistakes you might have missed.
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  • From ANON - Iria on November 06, 2004
    *Cough lovers spat cough* Ah, young love! Charlie and Hermione are still adorable even when they're fighting. Don't have much to say except, good as usual.
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  • From MidnightLilly on November 06, 2004
    Well, I hope Draco is involved in his little brother or sisters life, he's all ready changed, I hope she has a little girl I hope you give her a very unique name.

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  • From ANON - kimberly on November 03, 2004
    hey this is an awesome story. i cant wait to find out what happens. please update it soon

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  • From ANON - Wizarding Angel on November 02, 2004
    I like this fic very much and the moments really tugged at my heart..............Please up date soon and keep up with the excellent work
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  • From ANON - JayCee on November 01, 2004
    I found this story a couple of days ago and started to read it. Oh wow...where to start? Its a great plot and the pairing is so out of the ordinary Harry Potter Romantic FanFics...solusolutely love how you write but why did Ron and Harry have to die. *sobs* why?!?!?! Anyways I cant wait to read when the whole school finds out about her pregnancy. I was almost expecting Malfoy to fall into the roll of his half brothers father or something like that but I like the Hermione/Charlie pairing. Okay so I think I had more to say but now I forgot and I should probably try and sleep sometime tonight. Great Story!!

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  • From ANON - iria on November 01, 2004
    I'm eager to read what Draco's reaction will be when he finds out about Hermione's pregnancy, especially seeing that he (in my interruptation) seems to be falling in love with her. Ah, the angst! Great chapter by the way.
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  • From ANON - lacey weasley on November 01, 2004
    Great Chapter. Your diction and spelling errors have disappeared...like magic. I really am enjoying this story. Keep up the great work.
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  • From ANON - Juri on November 01, 2004
    Aw, hell you even made Draco likeable! I love every thing about this story. Pat yourself on the back since I'm a fickle bitch and usually lose interest after a few chapters. ^_^
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  • From MidnightLilly on November 01, 2004
    It would be hard loosing the two people you care about most, I wonder if that baby isn't ron's.
    Though it would do Draco good emotionally to have a half brother someone who would love him truly as he is.
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  • From ANON - iria on October 31, 2004
    If this story was a restaurant, I'd give it 5 stars!
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  • From Excel on October 30, 2004
    MARRY HERrry rry her, Charlie for the love of God...or else! Seriously, wonderful chapter likwaysways. I like how you convey Hermione's new family unit. This story is a terrific read although I'm STILL broken hearted over Ron and Harry. Sniff, sniff.
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  • From ANON - LACEY WEASLEY on October 30, 2004
    Wonderful chapter. I don't give compliments unless I mean them. Good work.


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  • From ANON - Juri on October 30, 2004
    *Big sigh* Ah, you could make anyone love the Weasley's. Their supportiveness and love for Hermione is touching and nicely done. And Charlie and Hermione...what can I say except aw!
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  • From ANON - erin kite on October 28, 2004
    and the audience goes, "awwwwwwwwww!" that was so sweet. i love love love LOVE IT! cant wait for more
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