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Reviews for Train Ride

By : PlanetPluto
  • From Lee on April 21, 2021

    So hot my teeth were sweating 


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  • From ANON - derp on January 16, 2013
    welp, i love this story! it was hot

    anyway, can i request a story?
    snape / hermione again

    umm snape has to protect hermione anddd she is in the dungeons (his 'home') for several days (maybe two weeks??)
    and well she's been slowly slowly slowly slowly falling in love with him, and one peaceful night snape reads and..... umm.... she somehow tries to seduce him? but she stutters and blushes alot (awwwwww) and i guess something happens and she somehow falls into his lap (cause being on one's lap is sexy) and they have hot sex lol but um i guess that snape has a very big bulge in his pants but he only fingers hermione, and she moans, and yeah
    hot sex
    oh and they kiss too

    is that okay?

    again: the story you wrote was hot
    hot
    hot
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  • From kittyperry on September 03, 2010
    cool story - very nicely done - but it needs a bit of cleaning up to make it even better.
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  • From MsShayxPear on August 25, 2010
    This was really good.
    Never really shipped Snape/Hermione but damn!
    Great description and a really good seeting
    Very very nice.

    As I can never resist a challenge heres my idea for a fic...
    Snape/Bellatrix... set during sometime during Deathly Hallows...


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  • From ElementalDemonessSorceress on August 08, 2007
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapter?
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  • From jenessa on April 13, 2007
    i loved this story!

    lol very smuty, and i also read your offer about requested stories...

    would you mind if i asked for one?

    I love hermione snape pairings and always thought it would be great if they had a situation where hermione is an aprentice and helping him in the a project and then loose controle...that sort of thing, i loved your writting style and am dying to hear back from you in regards to the request!

    thank you so much!
    Slytherine Sarcasm
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  • From ElementalDemonessSorceress on March 01, 2007
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From ANON - breastlady on July 25, 2006
    I liked it! What a nice invitation as well.
    Here's a plot bunny if you would be so kind. Professor Snape has been ordered by Dumbledore to teach Legilimency to Miss Hermione Granger. He puts everything he thinks would be important to hide in a pensive, but he neglects to hide the fact that he is a virgin. Once Hermione unearths this bit of information she is obsessed with the need to seduce him and make love to him so thoroughly that it will ruin him for any other woman. Her own experience is limited. Therefore she must craft her seduction at least partially on what she has read while researching human sexualiy over last summer. She has the feeling that the dreaded Severus Snape would really like to be dominated. But how to go about it.

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  • From ANON - Megan Consoer on July 11, 2006
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters? Or can you write a sequel to this story please?
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  • From ANON - high on June 26, 2006
    can you do a mix couple of hermione snape harry or even hermione snape draco or harry draco and ginny

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  • From ANON - Anon on January 09, 2006
    i loved it!
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 02, 2005
    Hot. Hot hot. I loved it!
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  • From ANON - Emalee on October 28, 2005
    Nice story, very realistic.
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  • From ANON - Yabo on October 28, 2005
    How about a SS/HG story, Snape is a vampire and Hermione finds out. Nice animalistic sex with that one, and him biting ther /shiver.
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  • From ANON - coldqueen on October 28, 2005
    I loved this one-shot. It was hot. It made me laugh for a minute though becaus I got an image in my head of a glass dor and butt cheek imprints in fog on it and that made me giggle. Still...this was great.

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