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Reviews for Delightful Pain

By : sabreenthequeen
  • From ANON - evilkittieninja on November 25, 2004
    Wow. I really like your story, though there is something that is REALLY annoying me. You keep changing tenses! You go from past to present in one sentence. I hate that T_T;;

    Other than that, it's really good. Yes, OCC and all, but I like it. ^o^
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  • From ANON - Vixen Malfoy on November 24, 2004
    Heya, i'm really liking this story. Can you please email me at the following address when you update next?? Thanks heaps! Love what you're doing with this idea, but i have to say... i'm glad that Draco is feeling guilty. Update soon!
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  • From ANON - Kette on November 23, 2004
    I love it. I await a much anticipated update.
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  • From ANON - Hanna Delacour on November 22, 2004
    After reading some of the other reviews I felt compelled to write a bit more. Everything expressed in reviews is opinion only and here is mine. YOU are the writer of the fic (and a brilliant fic it is) YOU can take it wherever you want. If you want them to fall in love, then they should fall in love. Writing is a force all it's own. The writer does not control the story as much as the story controls the writer. You have a great grasp on grammar and have an eloquent writing style. No one can shun your form. As for a comment about women not falling in love with their rapists, that is impossible, tell her to write me, I did fall in love with mine. Rape can occur in solid relationships, and sometimes the baser of our insticts wins out and it is not always a solid line between love and hate. Your story is great, don't let anyone tell you differently. And I must say you've gotten alot more in words from me then most of my favored authors :D YOU ROCK!!! ~ Hanna
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  • From ANON - Hanna Delacour on November 22, 2004
    Sorry about the lack of reviewers, don't worry, it is just the site. I love this story. I don't think the characters are that OOC at all. It is not that much of a stretch to see Draco behaving in such a way, or Hermione to be insecure in her sexuality. I love the story line and hope that you will continue, I know I will be dutifully checking in.... Don't let reviewers get you down, I'm not the best reviewer in the world, it doesn't mean that your work isn't appreciated. We're all just lazy, lol! Love it! Keep up the great work! And Please Update SOON! ~ Hanna
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  • From ANON - Watashi Sekai no Megami on November 21, 2004
    wow...awsome story
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  • From ANON - Elektra Malfoy on November 21, 2004
    This story is AWESOME! i can't wait to read more! simply fantastic! *grin* a couple of typos but nothing we all can't handle! just so long as you continue! as much as i don't want the story to end... I HAVE TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS!!! please update soon... i'm a BIG HG/DM fan and this is a GREAT story! *smile* so good luck and what ever you do... KEEP WRITING! Elektra xx
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  • From ANON - harahettamonkeyking on November 21, 2004
    wow....this is nice..don worry..^_^they're not that ooc..and its an okay ooc, coz ur jusifying their ooc-ness with the pov stuff...does that mak sense? anyways, this is really nice, please continue!! ur wiritng style is very nice...it keeps the readers interested^_^
    ~~harahetta monkey king
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  • From ANON - Meagan on November 20, 2004
    THAT FREAKIN' ROCKED!!!!! WRITE MORE PLEASE!!! THANK YOU!!!



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  • From ANON - hermione_grange on November 20, 2004
    i really love your fanfiction :D

    don
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  • From ANON - too cute on November 17, 2004
    *Gasping for breath* Need...more to survive!
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  • From ANON - shay on November 17, 2004
    omg omg omg... torture i waaant moore!!!!
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  • From ANON - pennywise on November 17, 2004
    i don't see how you could get any bad reviews! i usually don't like it when they're out of character, but I mean come on..it's hermione and draco. How are they NOT supposed to be out of character? Anyway I think you're doing a great job so please continue!
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  • From ANON - Pansy D. on November 04, 2004
    I love thtorytory. You' re really talented. Please, update soon! I can't wate!
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  • From ANON - Amy on November 03, 2004
    You know, I've never been much of a Hermione-Draco shipper, but I absolutely adore your story. It may be my sick side showing through, but it's incredibly sexy, and, in my opinion, very well-written. Please, keep up the good work. I love Draco's point of view- it's a nice switch.
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