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Reviews for Delightful Pain

By : sabreenthequeen
  • From ANON - Draco_Luva on November 03, 2004
    Update soon! I love it so far. But why is there so much blood? Even if he's a little brutal, she wouldn't bleed THAT much would she??
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  • From ANON - Richgal on November 01, 2004
    *hits you over the head*

    Yea, this chapter and chapter five both took the characters out of character.

    Malfoy seemed really pathetically stuiped, why would he feel guilty when he sees blood and her wounds but not when he hears her scream in pain?

    But I do love your writing style. :)
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  • From ANON - viz on October 31, 2004
    Wow, Hermione's in such emotional pain, I feel depressed! Very angst ridden and well thought out chapter. I can see why Draco and she have such a twisted...dare I say love/hate/sick relationship.
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  • From ANON - jeannette on October 30, 2004
    that was full of emotion, my eyes were glued to the chapters. i can't wait tod mod more
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  • From ANON - Apollonia on October 30, 2004
    Poor Hermione. :( Dealing with all of this abuse on her own.

    Enjoy the story as always. Please update soon! :)
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  • From ANON - loveally4287 on October 30, 2004
    Thanks so much for being so dedicated to writing stories and having the courage to post them. I'm 18. and just joined ff.net. These are so good. I just wanted to let you know to keep writing, because even those who are silent in their reviews are loving your stories

    Thanks
    ~~Ally~~
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  • From ANON - Essence on October 29, 2004
    I couldn't be silent anymore. I've admire your writing and think it cool. I was reading another story that was intresting and they stoped writting it. I hope you keep writing yours. This last chapter was intresting. He like stoped coming to her to not hurt her but ended up huting her. How Irontic
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  • From ANON - Shampoo on October 28, 2004
    Poor Hermione's all twisted up inside, thanks to sicko Draco! Besides, the sex, I don't see how she can tolerate his behavior. Why isn't she fighting him?! I'm not badmouthing this story, I just want to know why she doesn't fight back. I hope all will be revealed.
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  • From ANON - Triospleasure on October 20, 2004
    Sick
    Gooood
    But sick


    Hellva rape fantasy you got going on there kiddo.

    Keep it up

    Trio
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 20, 2004
    Ohhh....wow! You just can`t leave it there though, I mean, I have to know what happens next. This story is just amazing, but its also very dark. I can`t wait to find out whats going to happen! Please write more
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  • From on October 14, 2004
    Loved it. Loved it! Simply great. It was v. good, and I think what made it work extra well for me, was the change in narrator. I think it was a clever idea and I can't wait for the next upate! Keep up with the writing and I'll be looking out for the next chapter.
    Lotsa lov,
    Beki
    X~B~X
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  • From ANON - mygeneration101 on October 13, 2004
    you have to update! you just HAVE TOO! It's so AWESOME that awesome isn't even a word to describe it. There is no good enough word to describe it.
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  • From ANON - Apollonia on October 12, 2004
    Hmm, sounds like not only is he feeling guilty, he's developing feelings for her. Interesting. We got some background info on him having a crush on her to full-blown sexual attraction to insane obsession. Typical for a Slytherin. Hehe. This story is very good. Please continue. :)
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  • From ANON - paige on October 12, 2004
    Hi. I've been reading aff for nearly a year now, and I think you can make your story as extreme as you wish, as it is supposed to be for adults, so long as you include all the proper warnings at the beginning. Adults (those who aren't total sad cases) can make the decision to read or not to read.

    Also, if you're having problems writng this genre, it mighthelp if you read more of this sort of thing. Whatever you do, don't give up!
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  • From ANON - redherring on October 09, 2004
    I'm terribly sorry that you're discouraged by the scarcity of reviews around here. It is a shame, because this is a very well-written fic and I can't wait to see not only where you take this story, but how it gets there. Sorry for the copious cliches I'm using at the moment, just know that there are some of us who really do enjoy your work- personally, I'm just lazy when it comes to reviewing. I apologize! Please continue writing and update soon!
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