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Reviews for Duo Inter Armare

By : SiriusLives689
  • From Persy on June 19, 2021

    MORE!!!!!


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  • From catysmom1028 on July 12, 2010
    I like it. Please update soon.
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  • From frizzle2007 on July 02, 2010
    Hey I read this chapter and I loved it! I saw that you edited it recently could this mean that you might be continuing it? :-) I really hope so!! great writing.
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  • From DarqueHart on October 01, 2008
    OK, as requested, I read it. Good idea for a first story, resurrected. Why not update it? It would take but a few word changes to make it more compliant... specifically let Severus be the half-blood he is. If they get married before the law goes into effect, it does not matter if he's Pure, Half or Muggleborn. If they don't want the Ministry to interfere, just have them suggest getting married the Muggle way. Also, use a little honey to draw in readers ... add the actual words "marriage law" to your story preview and people will want to read it just for that. Regardless if you update or not, change the preview wording.
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  • From ElementalDemonessSorceress on August 12, 2008
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From ElementalDemonessSorceress on August 14, 2007
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From ANON - figgy on September 27, 2006
    Is that it? I liked it alot... more?
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  • From ANON - FLBanshee on September 26, 2006
    Nice start. Will it continue? This one has so much potential!
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  • From ANON - SusanDara on September 25, 2006
    Oh please say that you are thinking of more! This was such a great concept and such wonderful characterizations (?) I fell in love with the backstory and have a mind reeling with options for the future of this Hermione and Severus. WELL DONE! I would read more; however, alas, there is none :(

    Cheers and thank you
    Susan
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  • From ANON - Queen Celestia on September 25, 2006
    xDD Setting Grimmauld place on fire. Awesome. :) I liked the twist, although some of your sentences were awkward and they seemed to sentimental to me.>.> Kinda OOC. Ah well still amusing.
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  • From ANON - skydancer on September 25, 2006
    I love the " In your face/I'm getting what I want" Hermione. Hate to poop on it though but I think its "scared" and not "scarred"? at the end? "scared shitless" and "scarred for life" but then I still have to run through the I before E except after C ditty with my typing lol
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  • From ANON - MagicalAngelForever on September 24, 2006
    What! It can't be "finished" yet right? Hopefully, you'll still add more chapters. I really want to see what Hermione and Severus' previous realtionship was like. And what happens after they tell everyone of their marriage.
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  • From ANON - Lexy on September 24, 2006
    I absolutly love it. Great fic!
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  • From ANON - Citten on September 24, 2006
    i do hope that you mean the chapter's finished because this story is GREAT and you could continue it and have lots of fun with the story line and i DO hope to have an update on the story soon!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Megan Consoer on July 04, 2006
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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