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From ANON - Lumcer on June 21, 2009
OH how I so wish you had continued this story... It was so funny and ernist... Maybe I'll keep wishful thinking and Hope you decide to pick it up where you left off out of the blue one day. -_-

KCK-Lumcer
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From ANON - Banner on July 02, 2006
* giggle *
This story is interesting and sweet. I love the characterizations.
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From ANON - kayls on April 12, 2005
I think you're doing really well with your story.My first foray into slash was with "buffy" too, & I've only just started with Harry Potter slash recently, but there's just something about a lovely brunette & a sexy blonde that does it for me.Cheers.
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From ANON - thrnbrooke on December 05, 2004
What will Draco do? Let go of Harry or Blaise? I can't wait to hear more! I'm on pins and needles.
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From ANON - Fefs on December 04, 2004
You MUST update soon! Pretty pleease...? I just found your fic and i could'n stop myself from reading.. but know i had to cause there is no more chaps... I'm sad now... Is your fault you know! Oh! Don't botter with the characters are in or out! The way you did then is really interesting! I loved this caring Snape! Well... i'm going now!
hugs!
Ps: You are a fabulous writer and I loved single word of this fic!
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From ANON - Shame ness on December 03, 2004
That was so fucking funny..........the last part. I laughed. A lot. This fic is so delicious its almost like chocolate but not completely thats something thats hard to come by in a fic, I mean even Dark Chocolate is like 'wow' and I dont think I have ever found a Swiss Chocolate fic I mean is that even possible? okay so im totally getting off subject but yeah good fic write more. alalaala

AJ
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From ANON - Fate on November 08, 2004
yay i read the story! Its very good ^^ Glad you did kill off Draco. I'd have to slowly remove your brains using a spoon if you did. Meh anyway. Enough ego feeding from me. Write more ^^
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From ANON - Fate on November 08, 2004
Okay way to lazy to log in. Didn't get to read all of it but what i read was great ^^ Poor Malfoy though -__- this will be breif as i have to go watch queer as folk..it just so happens that you got me additiced again to harry potter fanfiction. Therefor i have read until too late and cannot finish this story *crys* one day i will get you i swear it. Oh well..Right. More. Now.
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From ANON - thrnbrooke on October 27, 2004
Can't wait for 6. They are going on a date! Yippie! Is Draco serious? And what is he working on? Severus was sexy being all dominate like that. Go Sev! Can't wait for more! Harry telling Ron and Hermione should be a blast!
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From ANON - Aimee on October 22, 2004
Quick update. You should write more! Now!

Aimee
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From ANON - Chelsea on October 21, 2004
The chapter title says it all. Midnight Study Sessions? *snort* Like they would actually be studying, espically at midnight. Yeah, right. What do you take me for, a fool? Silly girl, don't forget I have a dirty mind, all you have to do is say something totally unsexy and I can make it sexy! Like soap. *grin* Drop the soap all the time Harry! Draco will help you pick it up. No, heres a thought (I was talking about this is English today, don't ask how it came up) Just tie the soap to your foot, so then you have to bend over all the time!!! What a wonderful idea! Okay, I got a little off track there. So Blaise and Draco, eh? I don't remember seeing Blaise in the movies, but I do remember mentions of him in the books, but I can't remember what he did. *grin* My memory is going bad,but it is being filled with fanfiction and a lot of them has or has mention of Blaise and Draco. Who needs memories when you can get better stories about characters online. But Blaise said he is always ready for a romp with Draco, and I would just like to say so am I and Harry is to. Not at the same time...well maybe at the same time. *grin* But ignorant Blaise thinks he can top my Draco? Draco does not seem like the type to do bottom. Ha! Not the type to DO bottom!!! *howls with laughter* That's too funny. Draco said he doesn't fuck sleeping men, and I think it's because he likes them to squirm, and plus who would sleep during THAT with DRACO??? I mean come on, that is just a sin, but I'm sure you would have some pretty interesting dreams while he was fucking you. But alas our Draco did not want to have sex, spoil sport, and instead went to library to look in a book that sounds like one of those old cranky neighbors you always hear about. (I'm glad I don't know my neighbors) But I want to know what Draco isearsearching that would sound like a muggle cookbook? I know Harry will find out, the curious little(I hope not) stud muffin! I think since Harry's color is a bit off, Draco should nurse him back to health, which he did under the invisibility cloak. *grin* Well after Harry gave him a raspberry on his stomach when he got cramps! I hated it when my dad did that to me. I would always start screaming and would like freak out! God I hated that! But Draco's little voice (that sounded like Lucius, Ha!) that said he should jump up and blame everythin Han Harry sounds just like something Lucius would say! And what was Harry thinking? Dressing Draco? Who does that? You want to undress Draco and keep him that way, the idiot! Ugh. Stupid heros, always got to get to bed before it gets to late, stupid bloody heros! He didn't even ask Draco to join him! What a loser. He does not deserve a formal date with Draco to Hosmeade! (but I'm glad your giving him one. You always know what's best. Except when it comes to Harry/Snape dreams and Lucius and Snape sexcapades! But I suppose you can't know everything!)*grin* Draco leaving in a flourish of capes? *quirks brow* Now I know for sure he is gay! And what is Harry thinking about when Draco does this? Of the stupid Weasel and how he is going to tell him about his date with Draco! He needs to keep his eyes on Draco, and hands if possible but you can't have everything. And on a final note. If you get a plot bunny on a Lucius/Snape story then please by all means write the story! I can't wait till Snape "straightens out" Lucius! Eek! Please write more of them in this story too! More of this soon! I love it! *giggles and runs off* Was this review long enough of what?
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From ANON - Chelsea on October 21, 2004
Snape and Lucius....Lucius good submisstive...came for a fuck..pulling hair....straddling...*gulp* My mind can't take this. Now here is a question. "Little Sev" was in attention, but it little Sev really little? *smirk* Just a question that you might want to write a story on, one rainy day. Hermione is smart! I mean of course it would be better for Harry to have sex with Draco until after he is cured. Because before he wouldn't be able to perform to his full ability! And that would be tra Alt Although he wouldn't be able to fight Harry so he would be a nice little submissive thing just like his daddy.... Runs in the family...I love some good genes. I wanna read some Fairy Tales to Draco. I can make up some really good ones...including lots of kissing, grinding, and thrusting. You can have that in fairy tales, right? Theres no rule against that, right? Draco would enjoy it so I don't care! I am so glad that you decided to cure Draco! *sigh* Lucius was acting like Snape's slave, when Snape told him they needed to "talk" some more. I was sure you were going to elaborate and Snape was going to make Lucius say "yes master. Anything you say master. Please master" Take those three phrases and put them in a fic! That is a challenge! And Snape can't adopt Draco! Reasons: 1)Snape would have to watch Draco so he couldn't sneek off to fuck with Lucius, 2)Snape would have no excuse(other than sex) to see Lucius(I think Snape enjoys it that Lucius does things bad and "little Sev" has to ::straighten:: him out! (Ha! Get it? Straighten? Them having sex is gay, so it's not straight!) Ha! Good luck with that little Sev! Do it as many times as you want! Do it until you ::straighten:: him out! *howls with laughter* 3)Puts a damper of Lucius and Snape having sex. Those are very important reasons and you can not have any adoption going on, only lots and lots of dominate/submissive sex between those two! Sev needs to teach Lucius a lesson! Do it! Pound it into him! *grin* As much as needed and then some! Oh and Harry and Draco need to piss off Lucius. More grinding please. And more getting caught! Maybe next time by Dumbledore? Ha! That would be the greatest! More soon! More sex! More sex! And hmmmm....most importantly...more sex!!!!
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From ANON - Chelsea on October 21, 2004
Ha! Ron is jealous of Snape! I can feel it the little idiot! Kill him not Draco! *grabs a pitchfork* I'm ready! Lets get him! No? Why? But I wanna! That's not fair! Just a little poke? Okay, okay I wont hurt ron. *grumbles and throws pitchfork :accidently: towards Ron* *snickers* Sorry! I'm surprised that Ron knows Harry is gay. Harry must have told him because Ron is really dense and wouldn't be able to tell even if Harry was having a orgy with six guys...no better yet six duplic of of Draco! Oh! Thats a good story idea. Six Dracos+1 Harry+dense Ron=A bloody good time! Make Draco could do himself! Because we all know that Harry is thinking of Harry as a boyfriend! Bad Harry needs to share his feelings! It's not good to repress! Repressing is bad, he need to let it all out, well he kinda did at the end with Draco....or well he let something out anyways...I loved Draco's lack of modesty in the shower! I wouldn't mind being a fly on that wall! Could you write me in? And maybe I could attend Draco and Harry's wedding, because I don't think Harry is the sex before marraige type either...but I would mind if you made him one! *cackles evilly*
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From ANON - Chelsea on October 20, 2004
Poor Harry! He can't play in the snow....I think Draco would look good face down in the snow with Harry on top of him pounding- Eek! I said too much! Well, *cough* The rumors about Draco are hilarious. Turned into a woman?(That would be interesting) Brain melting out his ear? These magic folk are so silly! I loved the Snape dream. Harry telling Snape off was beautiful. But here is a little constructive criticism! *clears throat* Scared my Queen? *giggle* So Harry tells off Snape, Snape gets angry and slams Harry into a wall -are you still with me- Anger turns into major sexual tension and Snape jumps Harry and starts molesting him on the potions table. Huh? Is that pure gensius or what? I know you just don't have the right train of thought about how the boys should act but someday you'll get it down. *grin* Moving on I loved how when Harry was looking at Draco while he was sleeping he thought he looked sweet, and then was like who am I kidding, Draco is as sweet as he is innocent! My Draco is innocent! Sweet...not so much, but in a good way! *grumbles* Stupid Harry know nothing. I was so upset to hear that Draco can't keep any food down. If he doesn't eat then he will get too skinny and will waste away (and not look pretty when he is dead) and will have no energy to have sex with Harry! That is just poor planning on your part, my queen. *sighs and shakes head* Amateurs....I can't believe Snape told Harry to skip potions! Thats not a very good example for young, impressionable Harry! And then Snape left Harry with no hope of charming the Charms teacher! *giggle* (that line was cute) Snape is just ruining Harry's future left rig right!
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From ANON - Chelsea on October 20, 2004
Ha! I loved it! Draco got Harry in trouble with Sanpe. I should have known! And poor clumsy Harry bumping into Draco. I would bump into Draco so I could cop a feel. *cough* Anyways...when Draco said he wanted to go to bed I was like 'Harry please ask Draco if you can join him! It will make me day, no my week, no my month!' But alas no...he didn't say it and then my poor Draco collapsed and when he woke up he spewed. But I bet he still looked cute...okay I retract that last statment not even Draco could look good throwing up, but if anyone could, it would definitely be him! My Dracey is so sweet. Thinking it's a game to talk bad about harry's dead parents and keeping tallies on it. Such a Draco thing to do. But I can't believe he is losing! He must be very sick...*whimper* You said he was going to die but please don't do it! He is too cute to die and Harry and him haven't even had wilkey key sex yet! At least wait till after that if you are going to kill him. And if you kill him can you still let him die pretty and then you know perhaps leave me along with his body for about fifteen minutes! He would want me to pay tribute to him! *sigh* No? Well think about it. maybe you'll change your minan'tan't wait for more Harry and Draco banter!
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