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Reviews for The Bet

By : devotchka
  • From ANON - Eri on March 06, 2014
    Interesting story. It's "cease fire" though lol not "seize fire" u dont want to grab the fire as in seizing it you want to STOP the fire as in ceasing
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  • From Bellakuuipo on June 04, 2008
    This is one of my favorite Snape/Hermione fics. You laos put into the fic one of my guilty pleasures that song I wanna be bad. LOL

    This is so funny it makes me giggle everytime I read it.

    Well done.
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  • From ElementalDemonessSorceress on July 02, 2007
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From ANON - Megan Consoer on June 25, 2006
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters? Or can you write a sequel to this story please?
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  • From ANON - Snarky4Severus on October 05, 2005
    I, too, believe that Dumbledore is a closet Slytherin. What a wonderful way to set up such beautiful smut. Wow.
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  • From ANON - Nightwitch on July 28, 2005
    The Quote is from the movie "Batman" and I love your story.
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  • From ANON - Vash the Stampede on March 31, 2005
    A steamy and sweet interlude, and an amusing follow-up. What
    more can a fan ask for.

    Oh yeah, a sequel involving a certain declaration of love.

    Or has it been done?


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  • From ANON - Skade on February 06, 2005
    I think I read ur story before but very good lol strippin in the middle of a crowd go hermione! that takes balls!! speaking of balls.... lol ^_^
    anyways quote batman cos joker and my fav superhero EVER
    "have you ever danced with the devil in the pale moonlight? I ask that of all my prey, I just like the sound of it."
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  • From ANON - Zen Girl on November 04, 2004
    Batman was the movie!
    Intersting story!
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  • From ANON - Tiffany Gerald on October 10, 2004
    I've got an answer to your question. I don't know if anyone else has answered it. That quote comes from the original Batman movie starring Michael Keaton. That quote was spoken by Jack Nickleson as "The Joker".
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  • From ANON - mariteri on September 30, 2004
    The quote came from Batman, the one with Jack Nicklson as the Joker. Or at least that was what my bat senses told me. LOL! Nice work and hope to read more from you soon.
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  • From BrianChattillon on September 30, 2004
    I certainlly HOPE there is MORE chapters *Glares ebvilly at author*
    I vLOVE the way this is starting to shape up indeed, erotic ev an and YUMMY!
    I wait with baited breath for more, and remember kiddies Don't tease the Vampire
    (Original quote from Ultros :Remember kiddies Don't tease the octopus (3) (3) )
    BrianDarksoul~
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  • From ANON - RachelW on September 30, 2004
    OK, this was funny...really, I laughed even though I am normally highly annoyed with Hermione singing words to modern pop songs in fics.

    Now, I think you would do well to figure out if you want to write this in past or present tense and then stick with it. It was confusing when you kept switching back and forth between the two. And, on the story itself, I could possibly see Hermione doing the strip-tease on a bet in front of Snape alone(and even maybe with the one she lost bet bet to looking on)...but NOT in a public place in front of the other professors and strangers. However, despite this, Trewlaney's expressions were hilarious.
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  • From ANON - morgana on September 30, 2004
    "midnight in the garden of gond end evil"?
    and well done
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  • From ANON - curly on September 30, 2004
    Cute story especially for a first attempt. The ending was a very nice twist. Grammar wise, I didn't flow well when you swithched back and forth between present and past tense, especially whithin the same scene. It is ok to use present tense in the dialog, but not to swithch back and forth in the author's telling of the story. I think it would have sounded best if you kept to the past tense. Looking forward to reading more of your stories.
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