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Reviews for The Bet

By : devotchka
  • From ANON - DawnEB on September 30, 2004
    I loved the story. The only thing I wasn't sure about was how quickly and unashamedly Hermione threw herself into stripping off in a very public place, especially in front of the rest of the professors. I also loved the way you fitted in the 'Batman' quote - I almost overlooked it, but ertaertainly raised a smile when I realised, and it fitted in so well.
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  • From USTMistress on September 30, 2004
    I really enjoyed this story, and I believe your quote is from "Batman" - isn't that what The Joker says to little boy Bruce after he kills his parents?

    And to your reviewers who have a problem with Author's Notes - if you don't like them, don't read them!
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  • From ANON - Kay on September 29, 2004
    That was absolutely fabulous!! I loved this story! I laughed so much! Please continue and update soon!!!
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  • From ANON - Nazzy on September 29, 2004
    I have to agree with your other reviewer. I can't understand why authors are constantly putting little notes within the story. Its distracting and if you ask me childish. You want someone to take your work seriously then they come across a parenthesis with some comment. I like this story, and I'm looking forward to the next chapter, but please if you feel the need to comment on your own work wait until the end.
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  • From ANON - mariteri on September 29, 2004
    Okay. You know I have to say this is a good story. Good enough for me to forgive the fact that it felt like you had Hermione yelling the song rather than singing it when you had the song all in caps. But what I can' seem to get past is the very, truly unnecessary authorote.ote. You may have thought it cute. It wasn't. If you thought it confusing, rewrite it. If you didn't want to change it and you felt the need to comment on it, do it after you are done with the chapter. I've criticed others on this very point so I am going to try a different method here. In all the Harry Potter books that you've read, have you EVER seen an author's note? Do you get it now?
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  • From ANON - ancientgirl on September 29, 2004
    Wow, I love a forceful possesive Snape.
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