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Reviews for Harry Potter and the Ancient Vampiric Veela.

By : TheDarkBeginning
  • From ANON - Rachel on October 16, 2004
    AAAhhhh! This is the part I hate, the Almost-nothing-happens-but-its-necessery-for-the story part.

    Ok, Harry blew up the cauldron and ended up in the forest (how? Isn't the classroom in the dungeons? He would feel something breaking through stone walls. Just curious), met Lucius, met creature, yada, yada, yada... all fun, but minor to the story...

    I'm bichting, I am not? Sorry, I know it's something that has to be done, I know it adds flavour to the story, I know, I know... but I just can't wait for things to happen. Don't mind me, just stick to the original plan. It's going great by the way.
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  • From ANON - AzureHart on October 16, 2004
    Potter's Suicidal, & L. Malfoy is a good guy???

    *shakes head*

    I can't WAIT to see where you go from here.


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  • From ANON - Rachel on October 11, 2004
    Hey, my second review showed up... : )

    As I said in the first review that got lost somehow:

    I like the story, I know the idea has been used before but I like the way this one is developing. It seems original, diferent from the rest. I can wait to read the next chapters.

    One thing I have to say I am scare about is the vampire-veela character, It hard to write about something so powerfull, I hope it goes well (my best wishes on this one).

    I'll be waiting for the up dates. : )
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  • From ANON - Rachel on October 11, 2004
    This is actually my second review, I don't know what happend to the first.

    I LOVE IT. (the first one was better, just don't feel like writing everything again).
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