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Reviews for The Dare

By : MidnightAngel
  • From Sailorlily on September 14, 2007
    Mmm, so far it's good, more please
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  • From ANON - Miriam on September 20, 2006
    okay, so like finish the story, PLEASE!!! I must like it up to now because I'm DYING to know what happens. AGGG.
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  • From ANON - Anon on June 12, 2005
    I love this story, Winter is a fun Character. pity it hasnt been updated for so long, having troubles?
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  • From ANON - Lady Shiva on May 26, 2005
    I must admit, the ravioli song bit made me giggle pretty hard. thankfully it looks like this story just might shape up to be a damn fine piece of fiction. Good thing too, as I was afraid this was just going to be a rehash of the story "Seducing Severus Snape" by Mariegoos(I think thats the name). Either way, I'm actually quite looking forward to more =)
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  • From ANON - intofire101 on March 17, 2005
    this story is soooo good I love it, but that has a special reason behind it which you will see when I singh this review. I love the detention but he had to be all nice and then evil didn't he. I do have to say it keeps true to his character though which is one thing I am glad to see many stories don't keep him as Acurate as you have. I'm also glad to see him with a character that isn't in the books becase people always put him with people in the books but I don't think any of the book characters are really right for him. I'm sorry this is getting kind of long but there is so much I would like to say that I can't put in words. I supose I can just sum it up with I love the story keep up the good woprk and up date soon.
    Winter (yes that is my real name and what prompted me to read the story suprised?)
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  • From ANON - Midnight Dreams on December 19, 2004
    i love it ^.^ oooh naughty snape for looking down her shirt ^.~
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  • From lckarlsson on December 11, 2004
    Hey there!

    Still loving your story! It's all a bit surrealistic, but it's really funny. I can't believe he let her sing that song!

    Looking forward to the next detention!

    Love Leonora.
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  • From ANON - sam on December 09, 2004
    lmao! I laughed SO hard when she sang the ravioli song! please continue ASAP!
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 06, 2004
    I think you mean "toning it down."

    "Professor Snape!" I exclaimed joyously. I ran over to him, dumped myself in his lap, threw my arms around his neck, gave him a big hug, and a kiss on his cheek.

    OK, I have to ask, is this really your idea of how to seduce someone? Especially someone like Snape? Whatever Snape's personality problems, there's no way he could ever be seduced by an underage student, not even Perky Mary Sue.

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  • From ANON - Anon on December 05, 2004
    Wow, can anyone say, "blatant Mary Sue"? I definitely can; the summary itself screams Sue, right from the start. Let me be the first to ask, what's wrong with the canon characters? And why do you insist upon torturing Snape even more than he already is? Finally, grammar is good for you. That's all I have to say.
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  • From lckarlsson on December 05, 2004
    Yay!!! A new chapter finally! I'm still loving your story. I'm very curious to know how far Fred wants her to go. And I'm looking forward to that detention of hers!

    You get the italics by putting in front of the word/part you want in italic, and after the word/part. As for bold it's and .

    Hope this shows up in my review btw *giggles* maybe the letters in between will just turn italic/bold. I'm a bit curious to find out actually.

    Well, a very nice chapter - looking forward to the next one. Hope you won't have any troubles with that one. ;o)

    Love Leonora.
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  • From ANON - Midnight Dreams on November 23, 2004
    Wow! thats all i can say Wow!
    Heh i must admit, the only i came across your story was because you were logged on and i clicked on your pen name. i'm glad i did ^.^ i'm not a hard core hp fan but this story definitely has potential ^.~ Well keep up the good work yada yada ya...Can't wait to see what happens next ^.^

    ((probably soon to be avid reader of ..The Dare..))
    -Midnight Dreams
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  • From lckarlsson on November 21, 2004
    Hey Angel!

    I thought you said that you'd posted a new chapter, but I already read chapter three some time ago! Where is your new chapter?? I'm dying to read more of your story :o)

    Please update soon!

    Love Leonora.
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  • From lckarlsson on October 19, 2004
    That was sooo good! I think your story totally rocks! I couldn't stop laughing when picturing the scene w she she jumps into his lap, and when she says she thought he liked Lupin! He must be sooo mad now

    Seriously.. I can't wait for your next chapter.. write write write

    Love Leonora.
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  • From lckarlsson on October 17, 2004
    Hi there Midnight Angel!

    I hope this time I'll be able to post a review. I read your second chapter soon after you had posted it, and I tried to review it then, but there seemed to still be some trouble with that.

    I'm really enjoying your story, and now I am REALLY curious to find out what she is going to do! Don't leave me waiting for too long ;o)

    Keep up the good work.

    Love Leonora.
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