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Reviews for The Lost Potter

By : DracoMalfoysLover
  • From ANON - Brittney on January 12, 2006
    I love this story,good job
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  • From ANON - Kristina on December 11, 2005
    I realy loved reading this story. it was really good
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  • From ANON - l'etje on December 11, 2005
    this was very very good and i hope severus and isabelle get together
    keep going and post soon
    bye bye
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  • From ANON - l'etje on December 07, 2005
    this was very very good keep going and post soon bye bye
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 13, 2005
    Keep it going. Though the pairings aren't to my liking, I'm curious to c where this leads and how(if) the reactions change when ppl know that its Harry's sister.
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  • From ANON - Cac on July 23, 2005
    Nobody reveiwed! People are such assholes.

    I like the plot, but the writing is kind of.. I dun know, mechanical. Maybe that's not right, but - it's kind of like a script, maybe. If it was a script, actors would infuse character and feelings. But without... You don't say much about thoughts, and it's all kind of... like your telling someone, word for word practically, what happened, but it's not like it's actually HAPPENING. You get me? I'm not at all that confident about giving advice, what I'm saying I think I'm right but not at all sure. But I know something's missing. I wouldn't mind helping if you wanted, mail me.
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