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Reviews for Trials of Affliction and Light Sleeping

By : Padfoot
  • From ANON - the earth guide on October 12, 2004
    I am dying laughing here! This is hilarious. I like veela fics but in truth, the story line has become someone cliche already but this story has an intersting twist that makes it fresh and enjoyable. I LOVE your Hermione - she is exactly as I would imagine her being like in that situation. I did have a Ginny question, is there any particular reason why she's attracted to Malfoy even though she's female? Also, it is labeled as a Hermione/Draco fic. Is this a mistake? I know you mentioned putting up warning on slash scene (they don't bother me a bit) but that didn't seem to clarify if this is a fic about D/HP or D/HG. Anyway, update soon!


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  • From ANON - Mercedes on October 12, 2004
    Whee!!!!!!!!!!! This chapter was so much fun. I knew when Draco hated Luna that it was because she was threatening his mate. Great fun. I really loved how Hermione jumped in Draco's back in the middle of the Great Hall. All I have to say to that is, CAN I BE HERMIONE, CAN I CAN I PLEASE????? I REALLY WANT TO BE HERMIONE!!!!!! Okay, now that that is over with, is Draco going to kiss Hermione? How are you going to get them together in the end? If Veela's are only female, how do we get full-blood Veelas? (In regards to the HP books not your story, but maybe you have answered this question for your story incas someone like me asks it) Do they lay eggs or something? Speaking of eggs, which came first, the Veela or the egg? And lastly, why did the Draco cross the road?

    Okay, no more review for me when I am under the influence of cold medications, especially when said cold medicine is ComaQuill... I mean NyQuil.
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  • From ANON - genrou on October 11, 2004
    "Hermione had had to sit next to him for over a half an hour, soothingly rubbing his back while he was deeply breathing in and out into a plastic bag. "
    not paper? esp in the wizarding world?
    i love how herimone is not revealing to harry the reasons behind the behavoir-shes just ltting her best friend suffer in loyality to draco.
    i like the my ass is indead smart line..
    her jumping malfoy and herding him out like that...that was great. i would love tohere the school's opinion on that.
    and poor draco with the smells...i wonder if he'll reveal any mre amusing going ons through them.
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  • From ANON - Jules on October 11, 2004
    I am really enjoying this, even though I am have quite a bit of diffifulty seeing how this is a Draco & Hermione story. I do like their banter and their conversational topics are hilarious. I love how Hermione is getting all the gossip from Draco.
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  • From ANON - Dragon on October 11, 2004
    I thought that this stroy was a HG/DM not a HP/DM! So please tell me if it is still a HG/DM romance and if not make tcleaclear on your story summy please!
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  • From ANON - Danielle on October 11, 2004
    Im luvin dis story!! Its jokes, but when i read da summary it said bout draco n hermione, was dat rong!!
    Its doesnt mata though dis story is jokes!! Update soon!! Luv Danielle xx xx
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  • From ANON - Inell on October 11, 2004
    *bounces happily*

    I always see things that aren't there when it comes to these two! I can't read Hermione-centric fics that involve Draco because I always want them to get together regardless of pai pairing, darn it! LMAO...Sad, but true. I lurve Draco/Hermione that much!

    This fic is just wonderful. It's so funny! I always enjoy a fic that makes me laugh as well as smile at the thought of the romance that is to come between my favorite two characters! :)

    Inell
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  • From reetinkerbell on October 11, 2004
    lol..."I don't want to be bottom" got to be one of the funnies things I've ever read draco say in a fic or otherwise. lol...loved the chapter, and hmm...harry is dracos mate? interesting indeed. can't wait for more.
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  • From ANON - genrou on October 10, 2004
    okay the best part was definately when malfoy was begging "Please do not let me be bottom!
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  • From ANON - genrou on October 10, 2004
    no wonder last time i read it i was suprised to be at chapter 4 already. i had skipped this chapter. it does make a a bit more sence of things-though it actually workded without. but then we wouldnt have gotten to see the extent of snape's actions. ^__^
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  • From ANON - psr on October 10, 2004
    Loved the new chapters! Yeah, it's not what I'd call funny Ha I waI was just in a giggly mood that night. My mom, who's 69yrs old, read the story to see what all the laughing was about and ended up hogging the computer so she could read the whole thing. I think I've created a monster.
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  • From ANON - Mercedes on October 10, 2004
    The sad thing is that I probably would want the stew with toad legs in it, but only if I was hungry and had no desire to cook or even order food. The Ron thing, it just never dawned on me that he was there and nontiontioned again as saying something else. I guess I am so used to fics where Ron always has a snide comment that it didn't register.

    Onto my review of this chapter. I loved it. It was so much fun. Even though I am not a huge slash fan, I liked how you wrote it. It was very tasteful and not too graphic. I have a very visual mind and was extremely thankful that is was so tasteful because I could picture it better without thinking of a porn film gone wrong. I do that with some of the stories I've read because they are so graphic and crude that it ruins it for me. Now, I 've been meaning to comment on the bunny tail. I love the bunny tail, I can see this really hot Draco with a bunny tail. It works for him, the bunny tail. I just like saying bunny tail. I can't wait for you next chapter and I will try to respond to each chapter, but if I get behind then chances are I will respond after reading a couple of chapters.
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  • From ANON - scifichick774 on October 10, 2004
    *snicker* Still feel bad for Harry; oddly enough, not so much for Draco though. Looking forward to more.
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  • From ANON - Inell on October 10, 2004
    *giggle* Just delightful, as always. Hope everything gets figured out so Draco/Hermione get together and poor Harry isn't even more confused! LOL...And poor Draco! I can understand his lack of interest in snogging Harry, especially when Hermione is right there for him! *grin*

    Inell
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  • From ANON - Inell on October 10, 2004
    This story just puts this huge grin on my face and I eagerly read more, giggling about Draco's reactions the entire time! *grin*

    Inell
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