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Reviews for Trials of Affliction and Light Sleeping

By : Padfoot
  • From ANON - amniarix on October 10, 2004
    Once again another Padfoot the Marauder comic creation to tickle our fancy (and other spots!). Very creative story, it says M/F in the header, as I dont really read M/M I hope that its not incorrectly labeled. Well maybe just a M/M kiss, Harrry all confused is very sweet lol.
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  • From reetinkerbell on October 10, 2004
    I read the whole thing, and god. this is amazing. I love it. talk about a whole new twist to the whole draco!veela thing. I laughed out loud several times, especially when the guys start to hit on draco. poor him btw. and a question, why a bunny tail? does it have to do with him wanting to shag like a bunny or something else?

    love it and I can't wait for more. and I really can't wait for the dramione stuff to start happen, judging from the rest of the story so far, I know its going to be good.

    Ree
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  • From ANON - MADA on October 09, 2004
    OMG, LOLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLL
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  • From ANON - Mercedes on October 09, 2004
    I really hope that this review goes through. Could you let me know if it does? I really want to tell you what I think of your story and if you don't let me know then I guess I will have to email it to you but since I have a cold I could forget and then I would feel bad. Okay, on to the review.

    I love this story it is by far one of the funnier Draco Veela stories I have ever read. So far the only issue I seem to have is them using vegetables in their ons ons but that is only because I keep wondering if they are making a stew and are going to share it with me so I don't have to cook dinner. Oh, you did have me confused for a bit in the 3rd chapter, but that is because of the cold I have, it took longer for my brain to function properly and click into place. When Draco runs into Harry, you originally called Harry Weasel and I was wondering how Ron became the Boy Who Lived, but like I said it was the cold. So, your story is great and I can't wait for the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - genrou on October 09, 2004
    oh god i almost died. man this fic is os bloody awesome. "Snape had licked his ear!" holy shit thatll terrify me too. and then when the whole quidditch team was approaching him..*tears in eyes* and then when he was questiong if/how granger was going to rape him...
    bloody marvelous.
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  • From ANON - genrou on October 09, 2004
    i love your delieverence. its so hilarious and so strong and you just get so absorbed. its just perfect for this fic. see with lines like "What the fuck was that? WHAT THE FUCK WAS THAT?" perfect. ^____^ and to your word i get a new chap a day. itll be sad when its over.


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  • From ANON - maggie on October 09, 2004
    Hehehe, my god, I almost peed my pants this story is so funny, I was lucky not to spew the tea I was drinking all over my computer screen. This is totally brilliant
    I can
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  • From ANON - Jules on October 09, 2004
    Other bei being severly traumatized by the though of Snape licking Draco's ear - *smirk* - this is a great story.
    I also think I know why Hermione is unaffected ;)
    Am patirently waiting for smut. Please continue!
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  • From ANON - Semperputus on October 09, 2004
    Ok I was worried with the Harry thing but you got me intrigued. The yeast infection thing made me laugh out loud.
    So is Hermione going to beating of the male population of Hogwarts to protect her man. I'd be tempted to look him in a hidden room in the dungeon with me of course:)
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  • From ANON - Ning on October 09, 2004
    I hope this turns out to be a Draco/Hermione smut...
    But, moving on, I love the comedic scenes.
    *sigh* And here where Draco doesn't like being a heartthrob. Haha.
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  • From ANON - Polar Thestral on October 09, 2004
    LOL! This is the funniest story I have read for a long time. Your prose is wonderfully full of wit, it reads like a stream of thoughts. Wonderful. I also like how you've taken a cliche story and slanted it to the extent it has become really original. Not too many writers can pull that off. I really am hanging out impatiently waiting to see where you take this.

    Hugs,

    B xxx
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  • From ANON - Triospleasure on October 09, 2004
    Ok I'm a little pissed.

    Now ,"I" reviewed this fic chapter by chapter everyday faithfully. The damn thing (AFF) would not let me post!!!

    Don't think you didn't have any reviews ,you did.

    Probably Alot .

    Just look at how many you got in one day.
    So AFF must not have let anyone else post either.

    Your use of the vella blood was unique.I am a HUGE vella/draco fan. The bunny tailnow now that was ..inspired.

    Strait and attracted to men...Priceless

    Trio



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  • From ANON - triospleasure on October 09, 2004
    This is my 5th attempt to review this FAboo fic.

    I love it...........
    Trio
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  • From ANON - scifichick774 on October 09, 2004
    So this is working again...maybe? Love that Hermione figured things out and that she wasn't just falling prey to his 'seductive powers'. Can't wait to see what happens next.
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  • From ANON - Deanna on October 09, 2004
    It's grossly unfair that you haven't gotten ANY reviews yet, but you're over 1,000 hits. Don't worry, the story is well written, the plot is interesting and people ARE reading your work. They're just too lazy to tell you so! Keep it up, I'm interested in what happens next.
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