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Reviews for Trials of Affliction and Light Sleeping

By : Padfoot
  • From ANON - Inell on October 19, 2004
    Still enjoying this fo muo much, darlin'! It just makes me smile and bouncey whenever I see an update in the group. I do hope you eventually submit all your fics for archiving at Quiet Ones. Selfishly, I'd love to have them in one place to read *grin* Can't wait for more!

    Inell
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  • From ANON - scifichick774 on October 19, 2004
    Well, *good*. I'm glad that Ginny was able to help Hermione sort out her feelings...sort of...and give her the courage she needs to go after what she wants. Looking forward to more.
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  • From ANON - Jules on October 19, 2004
    Wow, I go away for a weekend and there's a boatload of new chapters.
    I especially liked the last couple, the emotional wrecking ball tearing through Hermione & Draco is great.
    I love the fact that Draco is completely ignorant of his feelings, how very in character. I also liked that Hermione really gave it to him in the hallway during the dance. I think her anger just throbbed.
    I'm kinda sleepy now so I am less curious than I usually would be to see what Ginny & Hermione are cooking up.
    Great story!
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  • From ANON - Laura on October 18, 2004
    Well it was a good guess until mating season ended. Now I'm left wondering about the gloden bikini and the leash comment... eeep. PLease keep the chapters comming. I can't wait till these two get together.
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  • From ANON - genrou on October 17, 2004
    know is that star wars refeerence just from your head andcommon knowledge or was it somewhat inspired by "pansy's volcano?"

    and it kiss ass that this story will be longer. i give that change my full support.

    and i wonder what the plan could be...

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  • From ANON - Night Siren on October 17, 2004
    Ah, I'm so tired I can't even think ahead and predict what Hermione's plan might be, except that it's something sexual! This chapter was really cute. There were a few lines I LOVED but I can't remember them right now and I'm going to be a lazy cad and not go back and find them. See the new chapter tomorrow!
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  • From ANON - Artemis on October 17, 2004
    oooooo, I can't wait to see what Hermione does! I bet she either snogs him senseless or give him the most incredible hand job of his life on the train. Personally, while the former is more realistic, I'd prefer the latter ;-) I can't wait for your next update! Keep going!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Mercedes on October 17, 2004
    That chapter was great. I am quite curious as to what Hermione is thinking right now. Hmm, so many plans that she could be coming up with. I am assuming that it has to do with proving that Draco is telling her the truth. I am curious about the golden bikini and leash but I am not sure that I really want to know. I am glad the story is going to be longer than 13 chapters. I really love this story an lon looking forward to the next chapter, I cannot wait to see what happens.
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  • From ANON - Triospleasure on October 17, 2004
    Thats tellin him Girl!


    Trio
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  • From reetinkerbell on October 17, 2004
    oh. wow. I loved it. can't wait for more. its just...wow. what will draco do now? I loved hermione and draco in this, not only the last scene, but hermione when she thought about you know, it and then when draco thought about it too. very good, and hermione? very real you know.

    Ree
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  • From on October 17, 2004
    i actually think that every girl that got hurt like that at least once in their lives should read chapter 11 of this story. it was beautifully written. please keep up the good work, can't wait to read more.
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  • From ANON - genrou on October 17, 2004
    ahhhh i was right. please take this time to fawn over my precognative abilities.

    i guess the thing that was disappointing was thee rush of time. i never like how often stories would have a set pace and then near the end will rush rush rush so that they can go to epilougue.
    and thats what im feeling here.

    but great bit:
    [i] Maybe in fifty years, he
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  • From ANON - Mercedes on October 17, 2004
    Oh wow, that was just awesome. I mean it was so good that I don't even have words for it. I decided to just skip reviewing the otheapteapters so that I could get through chapter 11. They were all great but 11 was unbelievable. It was so great and amazing and I should just stop right now because I am only going to repeat the same things over and over again, not thou wou wouldn't love to hear repeatedly how great it was. Once again, wow, just wow.
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  • From ANON - L on October 16, 2004
    Wow! Great fic! The bunny tail had me laughing. I'm curious about what would happen the next time mating season rolls around if Draco is in love with a girl. Will she be his mate or would he still be going crazy over some guy? Looking forward to the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - Mercedes on October 16, 2004
    Oh how fun, Hermione is in love with her patient, basically. Oh, I wanted to tell you that when I asked you you were going to get them toer, er, it wasn't really a questions to you as it was me contemplating the many ways that you could go about doing it. I do that sometimes, I say to myself "Well this is how I would do it, but how are they going to do it?" Does that make sense? I really shouldn't type everything I am thinking and contemplating, it confuses people and I don't like confusing people. By the way, I loved this chapter, now it is time for me to get onto chapter nine, I think that is the next one I have to read.
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